Reviews for Can't Believe
scarlet stars chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Review Game...Quick Fix

Ok, first, I think there should be a period after lips, and the no in the next line should be capitalized. I really like the flow, and your poem was realistic, I have friends like that too. The one thing I didn't like was the description. Maybe add little bit more description, so I can visual how you and they felt more personally. Anyways, great job! :)
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
these dont sound like good friends... nice poem.

XKRistie MarieX
casi chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
hey i tryed... i was sorta in the middle of takeing off a sweat shirt and so i oculdnt just up and run after you... but i yelled your name, i did, i was gunna give you a hug, but you were too fast. I told dev to but i dont think he believed i was serious... and i was... 100%. cuz i love ya!

(today sucks)

sweets555 chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Thats...horrible. I can't believe they would do that. *hug* hope something fantastic happened since then. thats my new outlook...not working so well yet.