Reviews for Lilith's Legacy
The Wandering Blue Andalite chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Lilith's Legacy indeed. It is evident you have done your research. She has been to so many places and mentioned in many parts of history. That Cain bit though, is that a bit of creativity on your end or did I miss something in my readings of Her? Either way, I can see her involvement in that incident. The ending was perfect; Lilith is the wind. Almost an oncoming storm. Your poetry is very pretty and well thought out.
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
Another lovely poem. You're an extemely good writer.
Emily Lee chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
this is amazing. wonderful writing. i love the rhyming and how it flows. it's impossible to find anything wrong with it. terrific job.
Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Nicely written!

I had no trouble following this poem. I like the soft, 'old-fashioned' (if I can call it that) language you use here. My only problem was with the line 'And I did follow him in flight', because the 'did' juts out a little awkwardly. Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine. I'd leave it as just 'followed'.

Overall, good work. (: