Reviews for Beauty and the Vampire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful story, please continue. ~Gforcethedragongirl7~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice story so far. its beautiful! great job and i cant wait to read more of it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story seems very promising. I'm looking forward to the next update. Xoxo Dragon Queen23 |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting start :) One thing I noticed in the beginning of this chapter... "She bit her lip as she descended up the stairs." You can't "descend" "up" haha. Ascend means to go up. Descend means to go down :):) best of luck! |