|Reviews for Bitter Fights in Silent Rooms|
| Falcon chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
(I don't wanna log in. Bite me.)
First, ze SPAGs: "I'm sorry." (period inside the quotations)
"placed *their by your/blindness." *there
Yeah, so that was a failed attempt at corrections. Moving on, Amber.
I am not really sure what you meant for this to be about (am I daft, or what?) but I just like the imagery in this a lot.
| camouflage chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
deep. i like it lots. write on my friend
| Amethyst Lin chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
The words create a tone and mood that transcends the phrase "beautifully eerie."
This is much darker than your usual work but very well done, none the less!