|Reviews for The Open Road|
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
this is a pretty awesome poem
i write in the car too (not driving of course, either)
:) actually, i usually will usually just get a passenger to write it for me
or i will record it into my cell phone
i really appreciate your world-views.
now, don't get me wrong. i don't entirely agree with them.
but i am really glad you have them
and that you can convey them so well in poetry.
this poem is really neat.
i really like the simplicity of its metaphors. it's v effective.
you aren't trying to make your reader learn something new,
just reminding them of things they already know.
it's almost list-like (or 'bullets' as the software programs may call it)
which i think is really fitting, too.
killer poem. keep doing it. -ty.