Reviews for Instead of Doing Work
lili999 chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
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growing-up chapter 4 . 2/11/2010
I considered writing this review in binary.

But i cant write in binary, and it would take too long, and you'd not have a clue what i was talking about anyway.

The point though, is that your point is a particularly good point.

We ARE numbers, we consume numbers, and numbers in the end - they kill us. We count them down, we add them up, We knock them back. (2% fat in our skinny milk, so we aim for a number we think we should be)

We dial them up.

And on and on it goes, and it never ends, because there is always atleast one, two, three more..

Love Student 17632743.

(Its late. Im tired. Im thinking in poetry.. Sorry. I did really like this though)
growing-up chapter 2 . 2/11/2010
sixteenth minute.

best thing since the last best thing...

Your so called individuality is a carefully constructed Fallacy.

Oi vey.

I think at this point i need to put you on Author Alert.

This stuff is very very good.
growing-up chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
but taking the long way around,

late to class again, for that

(story of my life.)

I love the way you think.

o.O
forget-me-nots chapter 4 . 11/13/2009
I didn't like this one as much as the others. It doesn't seem to flow quite as well. It's good, just a little bit choppy.
forget-me-nots chapter 3 . 11/13/2009
I like the ending few lines in particular.
forget-me-nots chapter 2 . 11/13/2009
This is really good, really true.
forget-me-nots chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
I like this line in particular: "I've got me right where I want me." In fact, I love this whole thing. Lurvely.
criti-sized chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
This was a very nice poem. I really liked the way that you wrote it out and how realistic is seemed as well.

C.S.
xPainxTruthxBeautyxHeartbreakx chapter 4 . 3/3/2009
You have a very unique talent of writing poetry :) It's amazing and beautiful!

Like very metaphorical but so very realistic at the same time especially the second and fourth one.

Write another when you can.

CheddarPixie/Kate
LyricalBelletrist chapter 4 . 3/3/2009
...

Did you honestly do this in one period?

This so beats my epic poem into the ground. XP
LyricalBelletrist chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Every unrequited love/crush is in here. It's perfect.
SchoolGirl53 chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
boy can i relate to THIS. i don't really have any criticism for you...