Reviews for downtown
persephone in waiting chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
this is actually the first review i've sent to anyone in some time. i really like this poem, especially the last few lines or so:

"you’ll never/

get enough of the/

butterfly called/


she flutters just/

ahead of you/

but you will/


catch her./

you chase/

you crash/

you burn"