Reviews for Once Upon A Dream
Phantasmagoria Land chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
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I love how the first line draws you in and there's just a feeling of loss and could-have-been (if that makes sense!). You described her really detailed and precise, and I particularly like "spider web veins". I can practically see her in my mind's eye.

Great job (:
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
whilst too-tight skirt... I feel like there should be an a there

I really love this piece. The descriptions are really heartbreaking and powerful. The whole piece is wonderful... especially how the first line sets up the idea that there was such potential lost.
right2reality chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Raw, honest and powerful. This is a good poem made great by an inspired ending line. Anyways, keep up the good work!

-right2reality
camouflage chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
sad and true. love the imagery. write on
a certain slant of light chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
As I've said, this is one h*ll of a raw poem. The descriptions are wonderful. I love how you ended the poem, btw. I think that's my favorite part. And, of course, thanks for the credit in the summary. :]
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
it's very descriptive. I love the line that says she played her fairy tale backward.