Reviews for Wish He Was Mine
SM chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
Hi! Old. But I came across this story right now and loved it. The agony of one-sided love and too of an introvert. You made my heart break for the poor girl. Sighs. That's so relatable though I've never been in love myself. :P
Loved it. :)
Unwritten Answers chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
yup, it really did remind me of the song! sweet, but sad though. i can relate to this, it really does hurt when you watch someone you care about fall in love with another person.
DreamForever03 chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
That was so sad but I know how she feels. I love the way you wrote this, pure emotion. amazing job. ]
Leigh Danington chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
wow that was amazing ans so unbelievably sad! it made me cry at the end specialy wen she thought he was smiling at her and he walked on by! loved it, please rite more and giv it a happy ending!
Cynically In Love chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Depressing...I started crying by the time I finished this. Great one-shot!
Cashaholic chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
It's beautiful ')


x. Cashaholic
QuasiHere chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Oh, I liked it. Would be great if you turned it into a full story, 'cause I don't want to stop reading yet. 3
koalabottle chapter 1 . 3/19/2008

Great story )