Reviews for The Jerk Next Door
Binkybaby chapter 4 . 6/2/2011
Haha wow
unlikely.story chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
Your stories are so well written.

I'm on chapter one, but it is so good I am afraid to continue reading in case I get hooked and it doesn't get finished.

I'm going to continue and am also trusting you to complete it so that I do not die of unfulfilled desire. :)
She Had Somewhere To Go chapter 4 . 5/16/2008
Good Chapter (:

Update soon
tobslytobby chapter 3 . 4/20/2008
really intersting story so far, update soon please.
superficialSagacity chapter 3 . 4/19/2008
Good job!

I love the name "Karyn"!

total vintage chapter 3 . 4/18/2008
haha good chapter. still lovin the story
She Had Somewhere To Go chapter 2 . 3/30/2008
A few minor errors here and there, but otherwise great!

Update soon :)
Classychik chapter 2 . 3/30/2008
update soon! luv it!
Karma.Rose chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Let's just say it's great to have a reason to visit FictionPress on a frequent basis again...

Please continue son ;]

- Stella.
beeyouteefull chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
great start! I can't wait for his reaction to her showing up for dinner!
katherine.kisses chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
great beginning! and hey, i don't blame her for dousing him in water. if someone was creeping around my house in the dead of night, i'd do more than that.

there's a certain type of you know, like, innocence to the main but you also get the feeling that she knows what she wants and is able to stand up for herself if the situatoin ever arose.

tell me if i'm way off track. because chances are, i am.

can't wait for more!
total vintage chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
loving it so far. i like the plot ] and the characters are very believable. D
spogebob's girlfriend chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
i love Spongey. _
Ivy Parker chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Sounds pretty interesting. And I definitely like the title!
npatel621 chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Hey this is actually a funny story. I hope you review soon. I actually sprayed someone that came into my backyard; it turned out to be someone from school who was dropping off something from school. He still won't let me live it down.
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