Reviews for Quartz
AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Although I never seemed to figure out the significance of Quartz entirely (is it someone's name?), I found this song to be a really good one. Your word choice is as strong as ever, and lines like "there's a rip in my chest" feel visceral and emphasis-filled. There's a core of meaning, and despite feeling a bit stream-of-consciousness born, this was a really good song that actually felt like it could benefit from music.

Overall, I found this to be another great work from you, definitely one of the best. Keep it up!
Apheliac chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
This is amazing! My fave of your songs so far :) This is really good. I like your repetition of lines, again.
shutitoff chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
This one reads like a poem. The emotion especially is beautiful.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Everybody got something to tell... has

Everybody got a secret to reveal... has

but nobody is able to tell (... the ( shouldn't be there

The summer in wich.. which

and took a walk in the beach... on the beach

it were erased by the waves... i dont think you need the it, but if you want something before were it should be they

The spring in wich... which

The autumn in wich.. which

I like the repetition a lot and I also like how you go through all the seasons. The descriptions are really great.