|Reviews for Vase|
| red-headed psychopaths wanted chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
aww bitter-sweet...but mostly bitter.
I liked it, you have a real talent for writing poems. .
| Aelfin chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
I loved this -
Its so close to my own situation, its so effective.
And the way you write is so pretty
(If writing can be described as pretty?) ]
| somebodystopme chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
I loved the last two lines.
It comes off as heartfelt.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
but the windows of her soul/it were closed for me... i'd get rid of it, but if you want them it should be they
the vase is as empty.. capital T
can you find me/or you don't care by the way?.. I think or don't your care? sounds better
I liked this... the whole vase thing was really awesome and I liked the treasure map thing. Nice job
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Well done. I felt a lot of emotion. Write on.
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
''To my best friend who asked me to read myself but I don't know who I can be'' an excellent line and great poem. Keep it Up!