Reviews for Vase
red-headed psychopaths wanted chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
aww bitter-sweet...but mostly bitter.

I liked it, you have a real talent for writing poems. .
Aelfin chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
I loved this -

Its so close to my own situation, its so effective.

And the way you write is so pretty

(If writing can be described as pretty?) ]


somebodystopme chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
I loved the last two lines.

It comes off as heartfelt.

I like.

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
but the windows of her soul/it were closed for me... i'd get rid of it, but if you want them it should be they

the vase is as empty.. capital T

can you find me/or you don't care by the way?.. I think or don't your care? sounds better

I liked this... the whole vase thing was really awesome and I liked the treasure map thing. Nice job
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Well done. I felt a lot of emotion. Write on.

Anna _
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
''To my best friend who asked me to read myself but I don't know who I can be'' an excellent line and great poem. Keep it Up!