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Reviews for
Dead End Hallways
Moon-Chaser
chapter 1 .
3/21/2008
I like the description that you use. The way you bring it all together and how you put the last line in.
keep it up.
me. moi. ich
chapter 1 .
3/20/2008
i like how the last line doesnt fit the rhyme scheme- good job