Reviews for Grocery Store Boy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh ho ho! That was a cute ending.I can't stop giggling! It's so cute! Nice one, Grocery Store Guy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I spent a good portion of this morning trying to find this story again (I had read it a long time ago). I really love single father fics and this was just adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so... I just so happened to stumble upon this story by complete utter accident, and I'm SO glad I did! What happened was, I was searching up on google, ideas for a name of a fictional grocery store... and so I got this story! I had to just take a peek at it, but then I found this story and it's so cute. I love it. :3 Excellent job! Pulled me in and kept me reading until the end. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such an adorable story! I love how you brought it together with the copy of Troy, and made a point about him being Mike outside of the job but the Grocery Store Boy at work. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute :) I can't get the grin off my face now *giggles* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is like, myfavorite kind of thing to read. The narrative was great, and the whole thing made me smile :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() gah, this is so adorable XD nice writing style! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just thought you should know that I totally have a stupid grin on my face because of how stupid-grin-inducing that just was. Wonderful :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet, so cute. I love it. I think this story is just adorable. I was going to write something I liked about the main character, but just now I realized that I don't know his name. Is it not in there? I don't think it is. Hm, that is really interesting. Anyway the main character, his parents forced him to go out with the kind of girl who abandons her children and got her pregnant. I find that whole scenario hard to believe. Your writing is all really good. Yay, more for me to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... that was really good. REALLY good. My eyes were getting wet. :) Yeah - I'm kind of a sap for this stuff - but still. It was good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an adorable oneshot. I really like the way you arranged it, and the end result was, of course, the desired one. You really can tell a lot, can't you? Nicely done, thumbs up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it. It was really cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was magical. Yes, magical. And adorable. I love you, you go on my alert list so I can watch you in all your amazing. Small children slashy ZOMG LAV! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am gushing over the fluffness of the fic. It's so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, this is so cute. Especially at the end when Mike has a copy of the magazine with Brad Pitt on it. Good job. I really like it. :] |