Wow, what a great plot twist! Im really amazed of how the nding turns out:))

That was sweet :)

i like it!

Ahh! This was a great oneshot. I don't see how anyone could find this confusing in the slightest ... It's just Leila having a vision about Owen marrying Candance, she returns to the present, and confesses to him. If only that could happen in real life and we would be able to tell what would happen if we didn't choose the right path. Great job once again! (:

I loved it. It took me some time to get that the first part was a vision. But after that I just got myself immersed into it. Great Job.

i would feel guilty also. but then again. they had a chance to get together and she didn't take it. so this is just mother nature's way of telling her that she has to risk it this time or else she'll lose him.

I don't understand the concept. Does the plot work backwards? Or how do you start with them at his wedding day and then end up with them together? It's very confusing to follow.

Cute story :)

I didn't exactly understand the plot and the scenes were a bit confusing, but it made me smile.

Very nicely done!

Aww..this was really good. I loved it!

interesting

This was really good! I don't totally get what time frame the middle part came in, but otherwise I really enjoyed it. Good job! :)

Aw, SO CUTE! I was nearly crying in the beginning, but then, yay!

loved it :D

Very Creative! The beginning got me, it reeled me in...I have a thing for angst-ridden, tortured first love. It's great!