|Reviews for Confused Survival|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
I like the flow and word choice throughout; they're quite effective together. And the subject matter of the piece is just a little familiar.
I didn't like the word choice of "totally" in the last line. It's probably just because it's overused in everyday speech, but I think "completely" would sound better for some reason. Maybe that's just me. Nice poem.
| a certain slant of light chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
I love this one so much. I don't care if I've already told you that, because it's so true. The last three lines define the 'confused' of the title, I think. 'sleeping whilst awake' is powerful, as well. Who isn't trapped in this addiction? I know I am. *adds to favs*