oh my god! this is truly beautiful!
your stories are exactly the type of stories i wanna read, the cute and utterly romantic and sappy romance stories! NEVER STOP WRITING!

I liked the original more :) It gave away the impact and the emotion. The alternate ending kind of contradicted what I felt when I read the original.

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I like this and how you kind of write it like prose, kind of like poetry. At least to me it kind of reads like poetry with the short lines and emotions. Awesome. I also like how it has the two endings. I can relate...to the first ending that is.

omg, that was so sweet!

I don't know why... but I like the sadder version better.

Great story!

i loved the alternate ending. its a little unrealistic but sweet nonetheless.

I absolutely love the alternate ending. It gives a whole different perspective, almost saying that you have to get the full story before you judge. It's a perfect reflection of my life right now. ]

i'm glad they ended up together. its really good! i actually cried. )

Oh wow, that was beautiful. You write one-shots so well. That was beautiful...I said that already, didn't I? :) Great job.

Hey there~

Nice oneshot. Very bittersweet (love that ;)) You could expand it so that it becomes longer but still, great job! (and I feel so bad for you giving me so many reviews and me not giving you one but you really deserved it)

Luv,

d.k

aw,so cute:)

(crys) juhi is so proud of u:)

haha,jkz jkz but that was a really good story

Your really talented! I really like all those one-shots of yours!

Grtz Silencia

AW! That is such a cute ending!

Very well written, with a lot of emotion

~Lillie

Aww this was a good ending. It feels a bit rushed but it was good I guess.