Reviews for the first told, last to know
thursdays and rain chapter 5 . 1/26/2009
i was mistaken.. this i lurve
thursdays and rain chapter 4 . 1/26/2009
for me, this is your best piece.. wonderful descriptions.. love the pen name, by the way ;)
Beauty From Pain chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Makes me wonder what the guy I'm interested in would think if he knew that all those songs I write are about him...another amazing poem.
Maxwelltollhouse chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
you are rather gifted with this poetry stuff, i shall not bother you with my attempts at interpretation as i fear i might be wrong.
softersin chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
WOW . This was out and out amazing,

I loved it. Very detailed.

excellent work.
just.because.lemonade.stand chapter 4 . 3/28/2008
pretty :)
just.because.lemonade.stand chapter 3 . 3/28/2008
pretty. me gusta
just.because.lemonade.stand chapter 2 . 3/28/2008
Fear-Among-The-Thousands chapter 4 . 3/26/2008
You emphesize a lot of anger into the poem.

I cna feel your anger coming form the poem.

Its ver strong and very weel worded.

Possibly lacking some sense of "No Rhyme"

But over all, very good

InuSaysLeGasp chapter 2 . 3/23/2008
Thank you so much for the recent review.

The second chapter to this really pulled at my heart.

With the sheepish tone and the admission guilt in between the cradle of the parentheses, I can think of this as something I myself have acted out several times over.
Fear-Among-The-Thousands chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
The author's note does add a lot to the poem.

i think it should be part of the poem.

Very Moving to me.


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just.because.lemonade.stand chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
wow grace. i loved it so much. its amazing. and which he? the authors note confused me.
Alphabetical Dreams chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
*gapes in wonder at beautiful poem* it's a amzing! i'm so flabbergasted by this fantastic piece. i love, love, love it! *said in singsong voice*

live, laugh, love.

C. a D.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
i actually liked the author's note!