Reviews for A Vampire Story
Emily chapter 10 . 10/7/2008
hey mc uhm

idk how to say this but ur link thingies ddnt show up in blue like they're supposed to

and also y did u put up a playlist?

im confuzzled abt that

lol aside from that all very good!

:D
Haley Hardcore chapter 9 . 9/20/2008
greatch chapter love the songs and aw
LittleMissProcrastinator chapter 9 . 9/18/2008
-sigh- I debated whether or not I should review this. I don't mean to be rude, and I know that you're entitled to write your story the way you want.

If you're just writing this for fun, that's fine. But if you're serious about writing and want to know my criticism, please message me.
Silly-girl15 chapter 9 . 9/17/2008
Good chap so cute! i love CRUSHCRUSHCRUSH super good. lol
Emily chapter 8 . 8/18/2008
ello this is yr buddy em

? y do u post like every other millenium?

i love this story and i cant stand waiting to read more (of course there'll never be enough for me to read)

also i kno who micheala and steven are supposed to be like in real life but who're anna and josh supposed to be? and is nicky u?

and girl u betta answer me or else ill call u! lol

:D (i got into the sugar too)
Love Is Dead chapter 8 . 8/17/2008
Love the chapter!

But I'm mad at you now... I'll explain later.

BUT I'M HOME! ;-D
My Metaphorical Life chapter 8 . 8/13/2008
update pretty please! And please add more depth ot detail, maybe longer chapters. This was a one minute read, though I enjoyed it
Haley Hardcore chapter 8 . 8/13/2008
good chapter and kewl their goin 2 hang out again
LoneWolf-234 chapter 8 . 8/13/2008
awsomefull! lol I just re-read all of the chapters because I forgot where I was hehe al well the story is so awsome that it doesnt matter! haha cant wait for more!
Silly-girl15 chapter 8 . 8/12/2008
good chap!
Demena chapter 8 . 8/12/2008
yay an update! ) gj P
Demena chapter 7 . 8/12/2008
*cries* this hasnt been updated in forever...cmon write more / lol
Emily chapter 7 . 8/2/2008
yo mc i love this story! who is anna based on? u? shes so cool!
My Metaphorical Life chapter 7 . 7/9/2008
you should update quicker and make your chapters longer. I like this though, so i'll read even if you don't, but you may loose other readers
xEndlesslyxSporadicx chapter 7 . 7/5/2008
like i love this story. it rocks. wOOt!
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