Reviews for Safe
RinkyDinkyDoo chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
That was surprisingly touching. I really liked it.
Sundown chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Very well written piece. The description is gentle and really aids the mood of the story. I also like that it didn't build up to be some great angsty love story, but just the basic idea of wishing to help somebody you love. Awesome. Loved it!
Malvolia chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Your usage of description is vivid. I could picture every detail so clearly. The chemistry between the two main characters is simply wonderful. Great work!
LucKyGrAyeS chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
wow. that was the most beautiful, most inspiring thing ive ever read on this site. your writing is very soft, very delicate. i really hope you continue with this story!
Billie.Joelle chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Wow. Incredible. The feelings, the emotions, the reactions, are all so realistic. Very nice job. The dialogue is also great. This is an impressive piece. Nice work.