|Reviews for Safe|
| RinkyDinkyDoo chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
That was surprisingly touching. I really liked it.
| Sundown chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Very well written piece. The description is gentle and really aids the mood of the story. I also like that it didn't build up to be some great angsty love story, but just the basic idea of wishing to help somebody you love. Awesome. Loved it!
| Malvolia chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Your usage of description is vivid. I could picture every detail so clearly. The chemistry between the two main characters is simply wonderful. Great work!
| LucKyGrAyeS chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
wow. that was the most beautiful, most inspiring thing ive ever read on this site. your writing is very soft, very delicate. i really hope you continue with this story!
| Billie.Joelle chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Wow. Incredible. The feelings, the emotions, the reactions, are all so realistic. Very nice job. The dialogue is also great. This is an impressive piece. Nice work.