Reviews for Angel wings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and cute ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. However it might be better to show the readers slowly the inner character of your characters rather than just coming out and stating stuff. Don't worry i have that problem that line just now was an indirect quote of my friend/editor. I cant wait to read more, I am a sucker for human shaped beings with wings. PS please read and review my story The Longest Time Away, I think you will like it, later in the parts I haven't written yet the main character gets wings too. You don't have to read it if you don't want too thou. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool. I love Angel Wings (A.W.) It's such a wonderful story thus far. Well, I'm going to read 1001 wishes now. And don't ever apologize to me for something as little as asking me to read a certain story. Well, have a wonderful time. Love KAYLA BROWN |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha haha i love it your fan! ~anaa |
![]() ![]() ![]() ha ha lovin the stories dude! |
![]() ![]() For some reason I can't remember Sakura's dark side. Oh well. Probably just cuz I haven't red it for a while. And while we're on that topic, it's about time! How long has it been? Anyways, had me fooled! I thought for sure Akera was the evil one. /shrugs. Oh well, good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No-! Wait-what? Wait-no! No no no! The demon isn't Daisuke or Akera, is it? Osprey |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, great chapter. I really like the song in the chapter. |
![]() ![]() oh, oh! i've heard that song beeforee! xD uh oh! Mighty's a' comin for ya sakura! good job! to lazy to log in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not half bad, this has potential, especially from what I've seen. However, I'd be nice if the chapterw were a little longer, they take me a couple minutes at most to read. And, I'd like to go back to Sakura's brothers, backtrack a bit, maybe introduce more of her history somehow, or maybe Jesse's. Either way, I'll be sure to keep reading. Have fun in Turkey! |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Sorry I haven't reviewed this in so long.) That was startling! He kissed her! Oh, my goodness, have you created a Wickham character? Osprey |
![]() ![]() mikayla here, just to lazy to sign in. anywho, hahaha! i like this chap best jesse's all mad! XD anyway,i should be able to finish the chap today after i finish vacuuming! :p great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() he will be punished. i still dont like Akera. he must be EVIL. thanx for updating. please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Ooh Jesse doesn't look to happy about the kiss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe aww, poor Jesse! Good job Silencia, your writing's getting better every time! |