|Reviews for The Serpent Forgotten|
| Julius Gillian chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Your use of personification tells a very riveting story, this is an excellent piece. I'd advise you to avoid sounding too ostentatious when writing in this kind of style, it's not that flowerly but sometimes it crosses that line. But I rarely found it annoying and I think this was a pleasent read.