Aww. That was so cute! Loved it. Thank you for sharing your story with us :)

The writer is so talented. You can publish you work on NovelStar App and earn big time. Also, I am sharing your book in Facebook to help reach readers.

nice..

Wait... So he's a sexual predator?

It was wonderful and magical. I fell inlove!

Super cute!

awww this was really sweet to read. good job!

Second best one shot I have ever read my entire life.

I'm curious.

How do you people do it?

I'm jealous.

This is a fantastic one shot. Glad I came across it.

Ohmy did he really left it on purpose ? Haha yeah I really like it

THAT WAS SO CUTE and I see we both share a love for messy brown hair, haha. Amazingly done!

awww :-P

This was so much fun! It's true that it's easier to talk to strangers who can't see you, so they naturally skipped over the stilted getting to know you phase and admitted that they were bored and wanted to be entertained. Her excitement about his angry calls was due to it being something out of the ordinary. The ending was pure fantasy, and that's why we read romance stories. Very enjoyable story.

Amazingly funny story with instantly likable characters. The phone conversations were...classic.

Can you please make this longer and actually make it into a longer story. It will be AMAZING! I loved it!
And in the longer story, they don't reveal themselves until like ten chapters and then they meet but they don't realize who each other area once voices through phones sounds a bit different. But when they become friends, Alana can like give the phone number of the phone she found and Jonathan would recognize it or something. And boom! There you go an outline of the extension of this story. PLEASE WRTE IT! You can do whatever you want with the story but please write it! It will be GREAT!

the coolest

SO GOD DAMN CUTE