I would love for this to be continued, the description sounds like it will work well and this story only gives me confidence that you could pull it through.

Please could you consider updating this one?
I know it's been years since you started it, but really it is lovely.
I understand if you won't, but I thought maybe a reminder that it was there would help?
Thanks
KaseyTrue

This seems like a really good start and makes me think of cinderella or snow white, where the mother dies. Also I love the premise!

please, pretty, pretty please continue!

This is awfully cute; I wish you would continue. Then again, you're such an amazing writer with so many duties to be done... I doubt you have much time, hm?

It may have been pesky, but you definitely got it right! The fairytale part was perfect, and I found the change into the actual story narrative abrupt and jarring, but wonderful because of that. I loved it! PLEASE continue with this eventually! :-)

OMG , So good! As is most of your writing. ;) Please continue it, I'm excited!

Lovely. It most definitely sounded like a fairytale. I can't wait to see how this turns out. Best of luck writing, Katica Locke, that is: if you continue!

You did perfectly well with the fairy tale part. The rest is equally as enticing. I for one (can't speak for everyone) would like to see more.

Wow I'm looking forward to this. I guess it's a bit like Cinderella with an extra twist. Please update soon! :)

Okay, this is amazing! Your delivery was so well carried out. It really was a fairy tale until Illias began his part. Then it just got real life. Then it ended. Ggrr.. next chapter.

i thought it sounded like a fairy tale..actually i just watched south parks "critter christmas' epsiode and i kept thinking of stan's dad narrating the whole story like he did for that episode while reading this. but anyways, i really liked it.

hm, not quiet a fairytale, I wouldn't say. More like one of those cultural stories passed on from generation to generation...maybe I have confused myself (yet again) but I thought there was a difference in fairytales and this form of story I'm unsuccessfully trying to describe...?

Nonetheless, it is a great beginning to a very unique and exciting-sounding story. I hope to you the best in the writing process and that I can have the joy of reading it soon!

This was really good and I would be oh so pleased if you wrote more :)

And it was a very good fairytale, although if the girl could talk to the goose the entire time, why didn't she just tell him to not go close to the fox? I guess thats how things work in fairy tales.

It's not marked complete so him growing up and having a very romantic fantasy adventure sounds really good to me_