Reviews for Fox Prince |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is very interesting please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love for this to be continued, the description sounds like it will work well and this story only gives me confidence that you could pull it through. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please could you consider updating this one? I know it's been years since you started it, but really it is lovely. I understand if you won't, but I thought maybe a reminder that it was there would help? Thanks KaseyTrue |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems like a really good start and makes me think of cinderella or snow white, where the mother dies. Also I love the premise! |
![]() ![]() please, pretty, pretty please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awfully cute; I wish you would continue. Then again, you're such an amazing writer with so many duties to be done... I doubt you have much time, hm? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It may have been pesky, but you definitely got it right! The fairytale part was perfect, and I found the change into the actual story narrative abrupt and jarring, but wonderful because of that. I loved it! PLEASE continue with this eventually! :-) |
![]() ![]() OMG , So good! As is most of your writing. ;) Please continue it, I'm excited! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely. It most definitely sounded like a fairytale. I can't wait to see how this turns out. Best of luck writing, Katica Locke, that is: if you continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did perfectly well with the fairy tale part. The rest is equally as enticing. I for one (can't speak for everyone) would like to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I'm looking forward to this. I guess it's a bit like Cinderella with an extra twist. Please update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this is amazing! Your delivery was so well carried out. It really was a fairy tale until Illias began his part. Then it just got real life. Then it ended. Ggrr.. next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i thought it sounded like a fairy tale..actually i just watched south parks "critter christmas' epsiode and i kept thinking of stan's dad narrating the whole story like he did for that episode while reading this. but anyways, i really liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm, not quiet a fairytale, I wouldn't say. More like one of those cultural stories passed on from generation to generation...maybe I have confused myself (yet again) but I thought there was a difference in fairytales and this form of story I'm unsuccessfully trying to describe...? Nonetheless, it is a great beginning to a very unique and exciting-sounding story. I hope to you the best in the writing process and that I can have the joy of reading it soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good and I would be oh so pleased if you wrote more :) And it was a very good fairytale, although if the girl could talk to the goose the entire time, why didn't she just tell him to not go close to the fox? I guess thats how things work in fairy tales. |