Reviews for Happily Ever After |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story makes me chuckle, definitely. Humorous and witty, you've done a very nice job characterizing this fairy godmother, though I do hope the quips will ease up as the story progresses - sometimes it's a bit overwhelming for me. And of course, the plot is probably one of the most unique one's I've seen in a very long time. Huge kudos for that, and here's hoping that Kestrel is packing to see the fairy godmother and not to just run away. Either way...this should be ...fun. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Giggle giggle! This is great! Waiting anxiously for more hilarity |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD I loved this story the moment I read the first chapter, and it's getting even better as I go on. I love, love, *love* Emmaline, she has this likable sardonic voice and a really sarcastic thing that is just irresistibly funny. The short chapters are nice, I guess it kind of fits the shortness in her personality. It's like she's impatient with even talking to you, but she's kind of enjoying it too, I don't know how to explain it. As much as I love your, it's still so much of a fairy tale, the kind that never fail to depress me. XD Kestrel's just too amazing to be real, lol~~ Anyway, I can't wait for you to continue! I'll be looking forward to it. ~Helenn |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good so far, but would it kill you to do a spell check? |
![]() ![]() Awesome! I LOVE IT! Please update it realy soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. Disney would be so much more entertaining if you wrote for them. (compliment) funny, cute, nice sarcastic tone, keep going! ~LL~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha i loved this chapter. please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha ha! This story is cute and innovative. I just wish you made the chapters a bit longer. :] Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is among the funniest stories I have ever read! I literally laughed out loud. Unique play on stereotypes, some kick-butt females, and pee-my-pants phrases all combined...wow, can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting take on fairy godmothers and it made me laugh. I'll definately keep reading. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha i really like this prologue. please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() haha. this sounds great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. Interesting take on the cliche; I hope to see an update soon. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! Please, please update soon! xx, Kah |