Reviews for another state of mind
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
great metaphor!
disabled account chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
This is quite beautiful - a little gem of a piece. I love the line "into a vast ocean of brownness." Well-executed for the brevity of the subject matter. Adieu, Kat
bella.fleur chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Lovelyy.

'a vast ocean of brownness', I like that. ]