|Reviews for Pheasant's eye|
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Absolutly love this! Adding to favs!
| mezzie chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Was it spring when Adonis
fell in love with her
and for that reason the leaves fell
from the trees before the time?
I often forget every day
but I remember such things
because the first love
is always unforgettable.
- that part sings especially well. the whole thing was like you were plucking strings of thought out of the air, and behind them all was the same theme at the root of each one. good work!
| Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Very lovely - I loved the opening lines especially.
One line I puzzled over a bit was 'It's pretty painfully'. At first I thought this was a typo, but when I read it a few times I think I caught what you meant. As in, pretty in a painful way?
All in all, great job. (:
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Pretty song. I liked it. I don't quite understand the significance of the pheasant's eye though, maybe that's just personal to you.
Good work though, and thanks for your review.