Reviews for Pheasant's eye
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Absolutly love this! Adding to favs!

XKristie MarieX
mezzie chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Was it spring when Adonis

fell in love with her

and for that reason the leaves fell

from the trees before the time?

I often forget every day

but I remember such things

because the first love

is always unforgettable.

- that part sings especially well. the whole thing was like you were plucking strings of thought out of the air, and behind them all was the same theme at the root of each one. good work!

mezzie
Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Very lovely - I loved the opening lines especially.

One line I puzzled over a bit was 'It's pretty painfully'. At first I thought this was a typo, but when I read it a few times I think I caught what you meant. As in, pretty in a painful way?

All in all, great job. (:
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Pretty song. I liked it. I don't quite understand the significance of the pheasant's eye though, maybe that's just personal to you.

Good work though, and thanks for your review.

[QV]