Reviews for Incest |
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![]() ![]() You should really write more of these |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very, very honest. Great job :] I love how they've all sort of evolved since the first poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Little tease, get on your knees." I had to close my eyes and look away after reading that line; it's so heart-wrenching! "Children never stand a chance." *Sighs* This collection needed to be writting; it was shocking and honest and real. Bravo! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "She's in control." Intense! Powerful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Clammy fingers dirty-dancing up my thighs." Wonderful description! "She convinces herself I like it now." *Shudders* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one struck a chord for me, and I cannot properly review it, as the thought of this poem brings back horrible memories, but it was raw, real, and honest, and you should be commended! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I know he’s glancing back through gaps in his fingers and his jeans are getting tight." You have such an incredible way of describing 'forbidden' scenes and 'negative human qualities.' I'm in awe; your talent is amazing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Now and then, they gaze slightly too long." Brilliant! Moving! Fascinating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Regards me with repulsed pity; I know she knows." Beautifully horrific! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A captivating story that shows the cyclical nature of abuse and incest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "As he brushes soft lips over mine in sexual sign language." Oh my! I love the sense of fear and apprehension, but there's this sickly sweet underlying tone of desire that makes this piece so fascinating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simply awesome. Wah completeness D: Hehe, you rock! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was the most different of this collection. Reapeted words to add rythm and ithalics to accentuate a word or two, but to add more disturb, the religious and arcaic english. It was posted the day of my cousin's birthday, poor him if he discovers this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your rhymes and your disturbing topics is interesting once you get used to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. That is so very vivid and true! Narq. |