|Reviews for the book of our lives|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
I don't really think "ripple" is the right word here, though I think I know what you mean.
The line "I'm weird" sounded odd to me; just too flat. maybe expand it, "and I am strange", or something like that. just an idea.
and I can relate terribly to this. People who waste paper, eat fur, etc. - I want to tell them what they're doing is wrong, but it's not polite, not conversational, and so on. great metaphor with the book.
| Walrus Lover 2.0 chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
I've never seen a page ripple.