Reviews for to sylvia plath
arcane devices chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
brilliant. it seems as if this has all been written on a tangent, and freestyle'd. your diction is deeply striking, not just because of the shock value but because they're well placed. i'd have to say that what allures me to this piece is because your words are so brusque and yet i just have no idea.

East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
wow, wasn't she great? I love this tribute it's quite fitting. I especially love your last verse.
Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
your very good
ilovetheopera chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Beautiful. So many lines that I adore in this poem, so much so that I can't decide between the possibilities that "twinges of hurt in your nuclear eyes" open up, and the surreality (?) of "we're another shade of dreamers."

Awesome pseudo-imagery in this. Perhaps it is the late hour, but I don't know what else to say except this grows on me.
me. moi. ich chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
all i can say is WOW. nice work.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
"avoiding the blackhole depression

and asphyxiating babies

feeling small" -that's awesome

this really turned out neat.

i like it.