Reviews for All That Is Dark
demonsdisciple chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Lovely. Love the idea of personifying a streetlight. An original idea and an original poem.
Professional Dreamer chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
What I like best? The idea of signs on a streetlamp starting to itch. And it going blind. Those are fantastic personifications.
FalconCC Cha-Kid chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
GAH! I lurve this one and when I feel like logging in I will put it on favorites!

One thing: "it's" is "it is" so you need to change it to "its" in the line "float in *its* honey-colored pool of radiance."

M favorite line is "but they are starting to itch."

Amethyst Lin chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Aw :( It's so sad! I like the combination of free form poetry and story format. It seems different from other more recent works I've read but still follows your general voice.

I like it.
In the Rye chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Hmnn. I liked the idea. I'm not sure you completely got the style you were going for, though. But it was decent.