I'm baaaaaaaaaaaack! I actually read this a few days ago but I hadn't had the time to review. Although that sounds really off, I work at night soooo. Anyways...

1) I know that Judi wants to believe that she and AJ can make it but she has a point. Why would Anita be doing all of this if all she had to do was test her baby and PROVE that the baby is Jared's?

2) I (as a reader ) know AJ can't lose face because people's lives are counting on him (that's a fact) and something that Judi has got to see, but thinking about it this way. All her life Judi has been on the fringe of gang life that doesn't mean she knows how this works and even though she's been immersed in it for (most of the story) a while she's still innocent about a lot of stuff.

3) This was a sad chapter. It was good but pretty sad all around. I believe Judi should hear Jared out but I also believe that Jared shouldn't take Judi away from her family.

I have done nothing all weekend only read this! I am completely hooked on this story! There are so many questions which still need answering! And poor Jared! He may be a drug dealing thug, but to find your long lost sister and she wants nothing to do with you, that has got to hurt something rotten! I can't wait for the next chapter, I really hope AJ figures out how to fix things!

it was a fine chapter even if it's hard to really appreciate it because this is a rough moment for Jared, Aj and Judith.

i still love jared and Aj, i hope they will try to make peace for judi'sake and team up to win her love back.

I know she wants them to acknowledge that she is their weak spot in front of everyone but she need to remember that they are gang leaders, it could be dangerous so she was getting on my nerves until the very end of the chapter when AJ didn't go after her. I can't see how he will win her back.

Sean and judi conversation was nice, you can feel the brotherly love sean has for judi.

i feel like not that much happened in this chapter so i can't wait for the next one.

i can't wait

It turned out to be a good chapter. I think airing out the relationship between Judi and Sean was inspired. )

Love your work!

good chapter good story overall ur really talented keep up the good work and oh its yaadie not yardies and its whine not wind ok . Please please plz hurry and update atleast 2 more chaptes before the new year yo it wud be and awesome christmas if u did...good job keep it up lookin 4wrd to the next chapter ad story

I love you for posting this chapter! Totally made my day! You should have let missy punch that puta Carmen ...when will she get what she deserves? Cannot wait to hear what excuse Judi's mom comes up with !

So, kinda surprised that judi didn't punch aj on sight, but sad that she walked away, even if she did have good reason. It's a great chapter, but i still feel like we're poised waiting for the big blow up to happen. It's good to know that there'll be more AJ in the next chapter, i think judi is slightly maxed out, which is probably why you had a missy moment. I love that by the way, forget Jesus, it is now officially 'What would Missy do?' The chapter isn't as choppy as you think, it flowed pretty well for the most part, the only section I think jumped a bit was moving from the club to Judi and AJs heart to heart, it sort of just dived in to the heavy stuff. All in all I loved it, especially the likkle island meeting.

yeah some parts seemed a bit... less like your normal work.

The Vince part...I mean one minute Judi was pissed at everyone involved and the next she's cool with vince? Normally I can see where Judith is coming from, but even if Vince wasn't her boyfriend, he still allowed her to find out about everything in such an awful way. Even if she wasn't as angry at him as she is AJ, she still seemed to let him off the hook pretty easily.

Plus the whole Anita cheated part...I'm a bit confused as to how Judith came up with that conclusion, I mean yeah, she looked at jared with longing but that could be b/c of anything...a women can be bitter b/c of anything. Anita cheating makes scense but the way judith got to that conclusion doesn't...seems a bit unrealistic.

Why is Judith soooo upset about AJ's pride getting in the way? To be fair, the whole reason why Judith couldn't continue a relationship with AJ wasn't just b/c he used her b/c she knew he had alterior motives from the start, but b/c she felt that her taking him back would contradict all the strength and confidence she had picked up throughout the course of their relationship.

Anyways, thanx for the update, I understand that this one was a beast to finish and I respect the fact that you even had the heart to post anything at all. :)

So...another brilliant chapter ;p yay!but I can't believe you ended it like that! I mean jeez way to make me suffer!...again ;)

ohh well, just wanted to say I loved it, good job, blah, blah, blah update soon etc.

(P.s. I love almost lover, so beautiful and sad and just amazing)

OKay so first i think this is one of my favorite chapters because i felt everything Judi did (and maybe a part of me would of done what Judi wanted to do and did). The friends she has a great and they are truly there for her and i loved how all four of them watched out for each other. And Missy being scared that she didn't want to be friends anymore was a great touch. Its nice to see how much Missy cares about their Friendship.

one let me start with the dark stuff...Judi first speaking with Sean was good and it showed that SHE was the one that had pushed them out of her mind. I think that was a good touch and it pointed to the fact when they were in the gym on Halloween and Vince's phone was ringing and he asked her if it was someone in her past and i always wondered then if he knew. (Nice touch)

Seeing AJ was heart breaking, touching, sad, and then just pissed me off. and at the end when he didn't go after her (which i knew he would but i still wanted him to) i understood why Judi said she had to move on nad i hope AJ knows what he is losing or Truly learns what he lost at that moment (although i still want them together in the end but boy needs to wake up)

Now on to Lighter things: Line of the DAY

"I asked where you from? You have those Rihanna eyes so I'm thinking you're a fellow Bajan." He gave me a small smile and I forced one back as I shook my head.

"No one in my family sounds as if they're singing when they talk, sorry."

Judi had me dying so hard i think i woke up my house. and the fact that she is so right makes it worst cause that is something i would say! You make my day when that one was said as a comeback. LOL

Well until next time.

thanks for the updat it was great )

all i can say is ..finally ...not a disappointment in the least..well worth the wait and worry that this story had died like so many others i love.. thank you for this update .. i hope you get 32 up soon ..

An update woo!

I'm so happy they finally got around to actually having a conversation and letting it all out but why did the conversation have to be so depressing? I was so sad when AJ implied she was weak and that's when I knew that this would be the end of their relationship. I do hope that they sort things out but I seriously have no idea how AJ will fix this. Or if he will ever be able to.

I love Missy, Talia & Lisa. They are such a great bunch of friends. I'm sure they'll help Judy through the moving on stage.

Lets hope that the family drama will be resolved soon though! Let's give Judy a happy ending :D

I want more of her n AJ! He has to fix it... he's being a douche and she's not exactly helping. GAH! This is driving me insane... rly is ahaha

my girl a wah make you take so long to put up a next chapter yo i feel like i been readin this story from way back when it good kepp up the good job but please move quicker