So I have read your entire story from start to finish and I loved it! It was well written and just great but I must say I was not entirely satisfied with your epilogue but nonetheless AMAZING story!

Have a frickkin' epilogue.
It is one of the best stories i have read in a long time.

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yes, epilogue!

I liked the relationship between your main characters & I absolutely love Jared & Missy. I didn't like how it was sort of rushed in the end (or that's how I felt it was) & that only your main characters got a happy ending. I admit I skipped a lot of parts cause they were boring, but there were a lot of scenes that I liked. I love the gangs and everything, but I did not like Judith. She annoyed the heck out of me. She was hypocrtical, and as you described, soft (even until the last chapter) I wish we could've seen her meet her dad though. The only other problems is that there were too many names to remember (I just assumed everyone hated her until proven otherwise) oh, & (to me) some scenes were really confusing or I didn't know how your characters got into some situations. & there were A LOT of grammar mistakes (but I understood what you were trying to say, so don't worry about that, I'm just pointing it out for future references)
Other than that, your story wasn't bad. ]

Amazing, you are

Crap. In future I will read the A/N at the end and not jump straight to the comment section, had I done so I would have seen that this story is complete lol. Boy am I glad I don't have to wait to updates, would have killed me.

Just when I think I've read all the decent stories on this site I stumble across this one and Oh. My. God. This story is SO good! You're chapters are longer than the average so I've been reading this for the past week and, dude, what a fantastic read it's been! Published is 08, it's 2013 and it's still not finished? I'm scared... although, at least it's a sign that you're updating. I would hate for this story to be abandoned. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

I really appreciate that you finally finished the story! It is one of my very favorites on fictionpress. The end seemed a little rushed to me though. I wish you had included some of judi's perspective during the time in which she patches up her relationship with jared. The develop between and of your characters is so great, mainly Judi and AJ. At the end each of them have some of each others personality because they love each other so much. Continue the good work!

thanks for completing the story.
i enjoyed the read. will eagerly wait for the epilogue now :)

holy hell, it's over...?! i can't believe it...! i've loved this story from start to finish. i've truly enjoyed following Jules, AJ and everyone else - thank you! thank you! thank you for this amazing story - loook so frickin forward to your next masterpiece! :D thank you 1000x over, Jammi!

Yay, you finally updated but so sad that the story ended and it ended well. One of the things I like about this story is that it's character driven with a nice plot which are the types of stories I like to read and write :) I love the character development and how much Judi has grown throughout the entire story. These characters are believable and all in all I really enjoyed it.

Awwww that was very sweet. Admittedly, I didn't really understand Judi's dad's native accent. But I got the gist. You're right, your writing style has changed. I'm looking forward to seeing what might happen next. AJ going to college and all that. Possibly even the father. I feel a lot is unresolved though. The Morales? Sean? Vince? Jose? Can't wait to find out. Sorry for the late review, have been on holiday in Europe.

Forget the epilogue, I vote for a sequel! Holy hell, this is hands down one of the best written stories I've ever read. It's right up there with Harry potter and Water For ElephAnts. I hope you continue to write and at least consider my request for a sequel :D

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