Reviews for never enough
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
I love the last three lines and how you describe the colors.
Aomera chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
this is wonderful - beautiful language, original use of it aswell and i love the first 2 lines especially.

err this might sound really random but how to get the spaces between each stanza? i have to use annoying lines...

keep writing! :)