|Reviews for Immortality's a Curse|
| Elber of Torou chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Very well written.
There is a wonderful style in this, almost stream-of-thought, but very forceful, emotional. I also like the choice of keeping Jayden at 14-the age when you feel like you own the world, but when nobody takes you seriously enough (normally) to let you do anything.
Seriously, I love it. Look out for an immortality story I am working on (maybe a few months) called 'Curiosity's Reward'. It will definitely be influenced by this.
| mysticthunder chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Aw! That was nice. A few spag mistakes, but apart from that, great!
| Mystery Hunter chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Wow...I've always wanted to be immortal...but now that I've read this...I don't know anymore. This was really...inspiring.
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
this was deep. i thought it was going to be dark but I liked the message at the end.
| Heart of Silver chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Good, but a bit like a different story you wrote. A little too mushy in my taste, sorry. Keep writing!