|Reviews for Illusoire|
| tsai chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
just happened to wander around fp after 4-ish years, came by your story and after a really nice first chapter...its gone :( but anyway hope you are doing well, wherever you are writing!
(cant pm cos i forgot my account, haha)
| Phyra Sparks chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
This seems really good! I wish I could have read more! Maybe you can publish it(or self publish)? I would buy it
| reader417 chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
I was just wondering why you left the first chapter of Illusoire up and took down the rest. I kinda got into the story and then saw the rest of it wasn't there and was disappointed. I understand the motive for taking it down was plagiarism but why not remove the entire thing instead?
| JFaith chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Aww, I was hoping for there to at least be a second chapter. But I understand the plagiarism-issue. It's not fair to anyone. But still, thanks for leaving your first chapter up. I only needed a glimpse to see the intricate, mysterious world you've created so far. One thing I really liked was how the witches were the ones to create the shapeshifters (if I didn't misread, that is). It's a pretty cool concept. And even the human males physically appear out of this world! Everyone has a trait (even if right now, it's only physical) unique to them.
I don't know if you've posted the rest of this on PH, but hopefully if I ever get accepted, I'll be able to read it and write more reviews. :D
| Lucretiablack chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I have to ask. Are you by chance posting this somewhere else? I would be willing to sign up if needed
| WhispersOfmyHeart chapter 2 . 7/14/2011
Sigh, yet another author gone / I am greatly saddened as well as angered that others have ruined such joy of readers. I was really looking forward to a supernatural story as well ... If you ever come back let me know.
| caffeinequeen chapter 2 . 5/7/2011
i clicked next chapter to find it's all been removed...oops i guess i probably should've noticed the word count :/
it sucks that you got plagiarized, so i seriously understand why you had to take your stories off. i wish i could black-belt their asses D:
on that note, good luck with whatever you do now, and i'll try applying to PH so i can continue reading how everything turns out for teagan(:
| caffeinequeen chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
my random thought's;
- love the title.
- your descriptions gave a really good idea of what the school looked like, but at times was a little too flowery.
- interesting idea, since most stories have vamps or werewolves. in their world, are there only humans, shape shifters, and witches then? or do they fit into one of the categories?
- if it's been over 60 years since the anti-discrimination, how is this the 'first time she and other humans would have to interact with [them]'?
- SO MUCH DESCRIPTION xD
- can all humans figure out whether someone is an Other just by feel or is Teagan a special case?
- scratch that, she's a half-breed. i can already tell that's going to cause some trouble for her heheheh
- i love that you integrated some backstory for the characters when they were taking roll. it's also pretty cool how you combined their personalities with aspects of what the animals they shape-shift into are like.
- urgh even i've always hated assigned seating. assigned seatingevil, yet dramatic
- who are aiden and cain again? seems like they just popped out of nowhere xD
ANYHOW, this was a pretty intense first chapter(:
can't wait to read more yeah
| thee-dark-enchantress chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
This rewrite is interesting and definitely intriguing. The plot is strong, the details firm and the characters well constructed. I am enjoying what you have done with the story, and seems i can not remember the original version past the first chapter, it will not impact my opinion on this version.
I'm both sad and extremely angry to learn people have been stealing your work. I admit, rather naively, that i never considered someone would steal mine or anyone else work. It fills me with horror and a sense of distrust. I can not blame you for removing your work and storing it somewhere safe. It's sad to think you can't even trust you work to be safe in your own haven. Why someone would be so petty and immoral escapes me. You did right by protecting your work. And you are an excellent author, never doubt that.
I'm sorry for all that has happened to you and i hope i will be able to read the rest of this story, if you have stopped updating due to idiots stealing it i hope i am able to read the continuation else where. I love your work, don't ever give up on your writing.
| StockingnJewlz chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
I really like what I have read of your story and the way you write. I was wondering if you would humour me and read what I have of my short story so far and give me advice on it. Even if you don't know me. If you are interested contact me at my email (since I don't have a fictionpress) at
| horse4ever chapter 11 . 1/21/2011
i really like thhe story
continue for the people who like it, not hate it
| Geee123 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
although i have only read the first chapter of this story i find that the way you write is beautiful and i enjoyed it very much. i understand why you have removed it as i have read what you have written on your home page. as i understand all this i still cant help but feel frustrated about what other have pushed writers into doing with their work, ie taking it down when a very interested and respectful reader ( i dare say it is i, though i feel quite idiotic saying it)still finds interest in what you have left posted.
i feel your anger and as a fellow writer i just thought i would lend my support (Cyber hug!) please do not let others deter you from writing for you are very talented.
| EmptySh3ll chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
I have been searching this story for so long. I can't even forget the name because I am in love with it. I know that you wont ever put it back on fictionpress because of some idiots out there who want to ruin the goodness of the world, but please, if this is ever re-posted or published, announce it and I will open my wallet.
| Taberah chapter 11 . 10/29/2010
This is the third time this month that I have seen authors writing notes about their stories that had been plagarized (one was a girl who continued posting her friend's stories as a last request and nearly all were copied without her permission) and it makes me want to rip those people's hair out.
I really liked the first chapter of this story and I hope it gets published so I can buy it and find out what happens.
| AbsolutelyFunky chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
OMG! I really love this story, and it's like eating at me that i can't read the rest anymore, If you ever do get published, please ANNOUNCE it, coz i reckon that i will go buy a copy of this story the moment that happens. ]]