woohoo a kiss! xD this chapter is so obviously building up to something! can't wait to read more when you have time to post again.

I'm really curious about this thought what does pompano shift into? I know its some water thing but what?

NO. this is a nightmare, you can't CAN'T leave us hanging like this. NO WAY

Oh sweet Jesus...

You're leaving me in agonyy...

Burning, painful, blistering agony.

Update soon :)

I might just die otherwise.

I LOVE THIS STORY so much :)

so so so so very much :)

Wow, wow, wow, wow. I did not expect that. I'm having conficted emotions right now. But not to long now before he finds out more about her... It's so good! I love it!

O-la-LA! Very nice! ;)

:D

i have nothing to say. I am pleased for nwo.

GAH

I'm holding all my favourite authors (including you) personally responsible for me not getting my assignments done XD~ Though it's not really your fault, is it? LOL I guess I get sidetracked easily ."

Lovely chapter- Kai's a cutie but a seriously spoilt, stuck up cutie nonetheless. Poor Tegs, that boy has such a temper :)

Can't wait to read more!

x reeka

AH BEHIND ON READNG THIS.

anyhoo, i like that one scene with how the princess's husband was chosen. That was a cool way to explain.

I also really like how you don't have any mistakes whatsoever. It makes me happy. :D

good luck on all those replies :P

Oh My God! I seriously just gasped when I read the last part and now my stomach is a nervous jumble. I'm so sad I'll have to wait :( Good luck with finals!

Hi,

I think this is an incredibly interesting story. What makes it so much better than other supernatural ones is that it has an actual history, and all-encompassing culture woven into it. Kudos )

But I think we need more answers and sooner. I don't know if you're trying to go for suspense or if you just haven't thought of what should happen, but it's getting monotonous. The only interesting things that have happened are Kai and Teagon's connection, her hybridness, and the mystery surrounding Sira and Avery. Everything else is just meaningless dialogue. Everything needs to develop more.

Thanks!

Irritation wracked his features - Isn't that just his normal look? lol

Oh, Pompano totally knows! Too much of a coincidence to bring that up just now! (And yes, I have absolutely nothing on which to base this declaration other than coincidence. ;-))

Hmm, interesting lecture, though I kind of feel like I just sat through class. LOL

Aww, how did I *know* that was going to happen AND that was where you were going to end it! Cruel! (but totally understandable) Ahh, cliffhangers... :-D Looking forward to more!

Kai is SO Hot!

omg! they make a good pair. One's hot tempered and the others cool and calculating. or something like tht. I like this chapter

"then his mouth crashed down on hers."

I am rather shocked as to how excited this story has made me. I mean, I don't normally get excited - I've a rather distant, apathetic personality, and it shows by my lack of investment. In terms of reading on this site, even if I come across a good read - intriguing plot, developed characters, etc - I often become bored with it. THIS, however, I was literally taken apart by: I love it. I don't know if it is because of the mystery, or the characters, or the way you just casually slide in new pieces of information, but I seriously can't wait for more. I hope you update soon - I will definitely be looking forward to it. Nice job: nice writing, really.

Oh my god was that intense. I am so excited about this story all over again.

Hi, I'm suffering through finals right now (only three more to go!) but it would be really great, you know, if you could update so I wouldn't be stuck at this horrible cliffhanger.

This is kind of ridiculous, how quickly your story got to me. I have my hardest final tomorrow, but what am I doing? Reading your story of course. I think this kind of dedication deserves an update, don't you? :P

OH MY GOD. They just kissed. HE just kissed her. I am freaking out. I don't even live in their world but Teagan's constant awareness of the hatred between the different species has gotten ME superaware and now all I can think is "OH MY GOD. They just kissed. HE just kissed her". This is what I'll be thinking during my final tomorrow.

Sorry for the rambling but I've been dying for a good story since finals started and I finally get it.

Update soon!

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