Reviews for Illusoire
chic rebel chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
this was fantastic! do we get to find out what teagan's animal form is? update soon please!
Lady Silverhawk chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
How exciting! _ Can't wait for more! :D
Giggles4evr chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
Thanks, good luck with yours! Thank you so much for writing! I love your story! I'm so happy he's figured out their soulmates, now for the hard part, telling Kai Teagan's a hybrid. That should be interesting. I also can't wait to see how he reacts and what happens because of all this. Also are Avery and Nasira soulmates too? It just seems like something that would happen and why Nasira would offer to keep Avery safe. Again thanks for writing! )
aethni chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
oh snap I really like this story !

:D

I love your writing style... *envy*
TheDarkScribe chapter 9 . 5/3/2009
Curse you! I was too busy to read this update, and then you UPDATED AGAIN, and I HAD to read it or fall too far behind (and I'm doing it at work, no less)! But, really, I'm glad you updated, so it's a mild curse. ;-)

Had to look at chapter 8 to remind myself what happened last. Oh yes, soulmates. M, should be interesting!

That losing your soulmate could have dangerous ramifications would mean little to him. After all, they were just stories, weren’t they? - Yeah, that'd be a problem. He'd definitely be an ass about it.

She never would have imagined how surreal it felt to have a completely normal conversation after her world had tilted off its axis. - That would be really hard to deal with, with that much going on in her head. And yet she pulls it off.

“Naroki doesn’t fail anyone,” Cian answered. “That’s a required course and he’s the only one who teaches it. Trust me, he doesn’t want to see you in his class again.” - Ahaha, awesome.

“One of the other popular ones is that a shapeshifter gang used to pick on him when he was a kid. He really hates Riven Graethe – if you keep going to class for a while you’ll hear all about it. People say Graethe headed the gang.” - Like Harry Potter! Poor Snape...

“They could reverse it.” - Oh, that sounds interesting. Wonder if it somehow has something to do with ... oh, God, I forget her name. The one in the deal with Teagan. Her. :-P

Nice chapter, filling in the plot well. I'll try to get to the next chapter tonight, but first, work calls! Bo...
VesperK chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
Oh oh oh more please!
A. L. Young chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
-grins like a fool-

Fantastic chapter. Weird thing was I was just peer-editing a B&B rewrite for one of my classmates. And I thought of Kai and Teagan.

(The interaction between them is exquisite, sadistic, a joy to read.)
artificial destiny chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
oh my god.

hahahhaha how do you write like that?

(small typo maybe? Maybe she could at least temper the link, even if he couldn’t block him completely.
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
ohh la la.

this is literally my favorite story right now. LOVED THE UPDATE!

update as soon as you can! can't wait to learn more and see the delicious interactions between the two enemies/lovers. haha
SassyGrl chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
Yay! Update soon!
Amarantis chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
That ending came unsuspected. You're keeping me waiting for more.

I liked it how you made the class topic concern them. Widen it up, instead of just fleetingly mention that it's what they're going to study about.

I'm very happy and feeling wonderful that Kai reappeared.
Maiia A chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
WooHoo! Not a long wait at all! :-D OMG! He kissed her? and you leave us hanging there? you mean mean person you! lol... I can see how no one would report being soulmates with the way the different races treat each other... i definately wouldnt want to be under that kind of scrutiny especially the extra animosity thats bound to come with it... yikes! Why did she tell him about the power? speakin of which what power? lol... please tell us soon! & why did he kiss her... i thought he hated her... or is it some kind of sneaky shape-shifter trick? lol... update soon & good luck with your labs :-)
Kjersti chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
And I was just about to say that I love how you're really active with this story again... THEN I read that I have to wait longer for the next chapter. No! :P

Anyway. I just love that this story is being posted again. It's absolutely great. I liked the class scene (although as a future teacher bored students is always sad to see). I wish you didn't end the chapter like that - cliff hangers are an evil, evil tool to use. :D Can't wait to see what happens, of course.

Keep up the good work! :)
Scribbling Death chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
Wah. Wow. And wow. This chapter, plus the one-shot of Teagan's mom that I just discovered, revealed a lot. And the ending. Wah! And the ending-I can't wait for the next chapter, no matter when it arrives! You definitely deserved the SKOW award (and made voting so much more easier for me!).

Something I found rather funny though-I never loved Cian. From the moment you had Kai, I desperately wanted some connection between him and Teagan. When it comes to the "bad guy" vs. "good guy" gunning for the girl, I tend to gradually warm up to the "bad" but this time it was all I wanted because of the way you wrote their interactions. Just, wow.

I love your writing style, the way you add in stuff from different cultures-like Beauty and the Beast-and the entire plot of the story. Thank you for writing such a great story!

-Scribbling Death
Sabreal chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
*splutters, very much outraged, then squeaks one sole word, clawing out of her trachea in hope and blatant need*

"Update?"
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