This chapter made me happy! Good writing, Beauty and the Beast, and some sexual tension? The fact that Kai can tell when she is lying and vice versa is an interesting concept which will come in handy. It certainly makes it harder for her to hide her secrets now. Anyways, there isn't much I want to say now that I haven't said before. It's really getting good now...

OMG! Amazing chapter. and the ending I loved it! Sorry I'm posting anonymously... i'll post a longer review signed in l8r~

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Its been a really long time that i've read a story that could captivate me with every word. This is one of the best i have ever read and i wanted you to know that i think you are a really good writer, one of the best on the site. I actually anticipate when your nest chapter comes out and i cant wait to read the next.

I absolutely love kai and Teagan.

hey i think i finally figured out your plot-connecting it to the one shot about Siobhan and Riven

So here it goes:

Riven is Teagan's father, and that makes her and Colin related. So they are half siblings? Teagan's mom is using Teagen for some big political movement in the future. I think she is planning to bring down the counsel. Along with all this trouble comes Kai, her soulmate. This is a bigger bonus to Teagan's mom because you said that with the soulmate thing comes greater power. But, Teagan also likes Cian? But not Kai? I guess you'll turn it into a gradual love since they are supposed to hate each other after all. I cannot wait until the next interaction between them! Please update soon! Like in a few weeks, not a few months :]

-sara

this is amazing! really good chapter, i can't wait to find out what's next. the plot is inspired :D and im loving the characters.

Wow this is really good so please update as soon as possible! :D

ACK! I love this! But you take SO long to update haha. Maybe I came in just in time. Maybe you're updating tomorrow ;) Anyways, I love how original this story is. It's awesome. Cant wait for the next chapter!

Talk about answers only raising more questions! Nice mix of information and mystery, this chapter-now I'm even more curious than before. And thanks for the bit of history thrown in, I enjoyed it. Also: way to wait, and come out with the plot-behind-the-plot (which I'm assuming is this lost spell) only after we're already hooked on the characters and their immediate concerns. A ridiculous amount of published books I've read manage to screw that up, so kudos to you.

Teagan's reaction to whatever-exactly-she-found-out was suspenseful and quite realistic. (And whatever I said in earlier reviews, there's no such thing as a Mary-Sue capable of throwing up-I realize I'm simplifying your character here, but it's true. ) I also think that taking a break from Kai was a good idea-give us too much of him and you dilute the tension of their interactions.

Suggestions: um, nothing much is coming to mind. I'm impatient to see what you do next, so update more often! (please)

~SA

*beams*

This is incredible, but I guess the 354 other reviews you have could've told you that.

I love the fact that we're given the human side of the story - even though readers usually know more than the characters themselves. Or, rather, different sorts of information - I daresay, different sorts of information. I can't wait to see you the Colin/Tea animosity plays out, though...

Teagan's mother is rather enigmatic; I hope we get to see more of her.

Keep writing!

Aw I love Cian. But I don't think the poor guy has a chance, especially now with Kai and Teagan being soulmates...

Looking forward to finding out more about this other world. This is probably one of those stories I'll reread several times after it is completed to catch all the hints that you've dropped before.

thanks so much for the update!

looking forward to Kai and Teagan interaction later! )

Hii! (:

This was a great chapter as usual and I'm really looking forward to the next one. Hopefully it has Teagan/Kai action? I really want to see how they react to each other. :)

Ahaha I've been waiting for this for ages. A bit of filler, in my opinion, but it's alright. I wouldn't like this if it moved too quickly anyway. Definitely can't wait to understand more, though, and since the summary focuses on soulmates, I wonder how important that concept is.

Hopefully you can update soon! (:

This story is too sexy. Really, it's amazing haha. Keep it up! I love the history in this story. I love the backstory because it makes it more real...like a real world we've all been granted a window to. :D yay

this story is so interesting. i'm glad we're getting some insight on the whole relationships between everyone and some information on soulmates. :)