| Reviews for Illusoire |
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   greyes chapter 9 . 4/28/2009 Thanks for the lovely response to my last review! Not many people have the time to respond to those kind of things. This was a good chapter, although I'm hoping the next one will have Teagan and Kai interacting for the first time since they realised they were soulmates. (I'm assuming Kai has recognized the connection as well?) As I've said before, I love the world you have created here. The twisted politics as well as the deep history of all of the races makes your story wonderfully confusing and interesting. I'm afraid I didn't know about this story back when I was voting for SKow, but if I had you can bet I would have voted for it! Oh, and good luck as well with your finals if you haven't already taken them... |
| Written chapter 9 . 4/28/2009 WOW. I'm so stupid that I never finished reading this before! very, very impressed with this story, honestly. I love the level of detail and just, wow, everything. what a great supernatural story. I feel a little sad, now that I've reached chapter 9! ah well, hope you update soon :) |
| Written chapter 6 . 4/28/2009 eep! that cian seems great, but I think she might develop something for someone else along the line? we'll see I guess :) |
| Written chapter 5 . 4/28/2009 whoa, I kind of... like? nasira. I mean, I'm not sure if that's the right way to put it, but I cant wait to find out more about her. she seems so... powerful. and teagan is a hybrid! i thought she was only a half-breed. that's very interesting. I was wondering about that, since she seemed to be able to sense what race people were, which witches apparently can't do... anyway. I love the descriptions, because of the WAY she senses things. like, the auras and stuff. fantastic! |
| Written chapter 4 . 4/28/2009 I am getting super into this story. kai sounds awesome and I wonder what kind of character development we'll see with him? you've done a great job in showing the school politics, the different teaching styles, and etc. I love that you focus on things like a syllabus; it grounds a fantastical story in a reality we are familiar with, and that really helps me relate. well done! |
| Kjersti chapter 9 . 4/28/2009 Hm. Good chapter, even if it was all conversation and scary-shadow-Kai lurking in the back of Teagan's head. Can't wait to read more. I love this universe. (Wouldn't like to live in it, of course. You know what I mean, I hope.) Keep up the good work! :) |
| heavengurl899 chapter 9 . 4/28/2009 haha very informative chapter :D is there anyway you could do a little recap excerpt at the beginning of each chapter because I completely forgot what happened in previous chapters. It would be helpful. |
| d0rkifi3d chapter 9 . 4/28/2009 yay update! lol so I have a sneaking suspicion that kai can somehow hear teagan's thoughts? hm anyway this chapter was very interesting with lots of new information haha sometimes all the names have me sort of confused but I'll figure it out. Thanks for updating! |
| CATpuccino chapter 9 . 4/28/2009 You're absolutely forgiven. It's been worth the wait and about the parts that are a bit confusing, yes they are. Reading this makes me feel like a mere human for the lack of understanding. ;P |
| Freddy Teddy chapter 9 . 4/28/2009 I would be besides myself in disgust...but i like kai. |
| Evenstar1389 chapter 9 . 4/28/2009 thanks for the new chapter! I'm almost finishing my end of semester final exams too D cant wait for more as always |
| growing-up chapter 9 . 4/28/2009 im following, i think. Either way, i freicking love it, and i want more as soon as you can get it on screen, lovely. :) |
| Klianie Janiko chapter 9 . 4/28/2009 Will Cian and Kai have a confrontation? Will they meet Siohban? |
| MusicallyJ chapter 9 . 4/27/2009 Yay ur bak |
| Isobel chapter 9 . 4/27/2009 I am in love with this story! Please keep writing! I love the intensity and the flawless writing and characterization. |