Super digging this story. Love how original the concept and the world is, and I'm so impatient to see more of Kai and find out what the deal is! Just wish the chapters were longer. Please keep working on it!

xoxo

Sekhra

Alot of info to take in in this chappy... I like that we're finally getting a bit more of the different races history... I'm a little confused though.. .are Kai and Teagan "mated" so to speak... or is she just hyper aware of him now? and i thought the "memories" of the soul mates that Teagan saw were a bit hazy... they didnt really explain the whole process... other than the blood joining... but if you have to exchange blood that means that kai & Tea cant be joined cause they didnt exchange blood... or did they and i missed it? i'm even more confused now... lol... and i think that Teagan being the soulmate of a shape shifter qualifies as an emergency...so maybe she should contact her mum... lol ... but thats jsut me... I am super excited to see what happens next... please update soon :-)

Yay! Much love to you for posting again and sympathies about finals - I hear about the horror of finals week from my college friends quite often, and much kudos for putting school first. :)

I love Teagan, but I can't wait to see more of Kai, and about the whole thing with the original spell and all that. :)

thanks so much for updating!

i hope your tests went well :)

you should try to publish some of this stuff! its great! :DD

Should I bother asking you to update soon?

I missed Kai.

:(

Awesome chapter! I needed this. x) Thanks a bunch...can't wait until her soulmate's back though. Miss the interaction.

Thanks for updating! A great chapter. The plot thickens... :-)

So I just read this again for the millionth time - man, i must've read this about forty times for skow, and then beforehand, and afterwards and believe you me, I've loved it every single time. so goodness PLEASE UPDATE SO I DON'T HAVE TO WRITHE IN PAIN ANYMORE. And you can er, pass that message on to Myrika and Kiana as well.

I haven't read the first version in a long time, although I'll have to get to that now to fill the void of no more chapters somehow, but man this is a massive rewrite. I love every single one of these characters, they're so alive. I can feel them through the words, almost. And that's all because your writing is absolutely fantastic. :)

Now you can stop being all perfectionist-y and post the next chapter. So I don't die or something.

I love where this story is headed, and I can't wait for the next chapter! I feel like the real action is starting now that Teagan and Kai have formed a connection. Everything until this chapter has felt almost like a warmup. Yet you have already created a wonderful world in this story with the clashing races of the Others, the Humans, and the Hybrids. (Or Hyrbrid, if Teagan is the only one.) I'll admit that I'm jealous. If only every author could be so creative!

i love this story so far - i just wanted to say that the knowledge stone reminded me of when i have a tune stuck in my head and i want to find out where it's from, except i can't type a tune into google or anything...random, i know.

I'm loving the Teagan/Kai interactions - is it wrong that I prefer him over Cian even though Kai's more evil? hehe.

Update SOON!

I'm really liking this story so far. In a twisted way it reminds me of Harry Potter - the school and magic and characters. But its a good thing, although the plotline is nothing like HP. I love your long chapters too.

But you better not leave us hanging on the last word 'soulmates' for long!

omg i just happened to stumble upon this story

and its great!

i cant believe you left it at that!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

This is one of the most original, creative and intriguing stories I've read in a long time! Please update often because I'm going to be looking forward to reading the next chapter every day!

umm... yeah... don't expect coherency in thie review. That said my impression of this story are as follow... "Hmm, Wha?, aw, doh., Bwahaha, sweet., yay!, ar..." in summary, I really like this story.

Hey!

I just had to tell you that this is one of the best original stories I have read in the last few month (and I read a lot!)

Please update soon! (I'm not trying to hurry you, that cliffhanger is just rather frustrating...)

One suggestion: Maybe offer more of a view into the relationship between the main character and her family/friends. It's a bit hard to figure out her situation... (who knows how much? how exactly did her mother hide her again? how come no one ever found out what she was? who's pretending to be her parents? how did they pull it off? etc.) it would make the storry more rounded. I hope I didn't offend you with this (-: it's just meant as a suggestion for improvement. If you wish to talk to me about it, feel free to e-mail me.

best regards

Lyn ()

P.S.: If there are any grammatical or spelling mistakes in here, please don't take me for a fool - English is not my first language