Cool chapter. :)

oh no what's going to happen? kai is interesting...and sira too. I feel sorry for avery not knowing what's going on...really great chpater! can't wait for the next.

Go Teagan! Maybe slapping him wasn't the greatest idea, but personally I'm all for it. :D He's a useless fleshbag.

I'm sorry to ask such a dumb question, but why is Teagan's mom a secret? Did I miss something or are the reasons yet to come?

Aside from that confusion, EXCELLENT CHAPTER. REALLY REALLY GOOD.

Ep! A cliffhanger!

Update soon! xD

Loving this story!

Characters having a mind of their own.. well its not the first time i've ever heard of that.

You know when i got the subscription email about this i think it was the first time i actually read the summary strangely enough. It almost surprised me of its talk of soulmates and not believing and its got me thinking even more. I always read this slowly like im trying to get as much of it in as possible and i really want to congratulate you on writing a story that eats into me quite as much as this one does. Its pretty insane.

And also even though general concensus wanted you to not put this on hold and went against my permission im kind of glad that they did. Its sort of scary to think that when sometimes you churn out these chapters so slow if you started something else it might be next year til you updated again and even then it would be pretty grim for us all if you lost inspiration or direction for this.

Waiting patiently in anticipation for the next one

Sian x

So I really enjoyed this chapter. It was already good times when Teagan and Kai had the little mini showdown in the classroom, and I definitely had one of those "oh, snap!" moments when she outright smacked him. I think I love that girl.

And the plot just keeps looking more and more interesting. The fact that Avery has been brought into it makes it that much more personal for Teagan, and the whole mystery surrounding Sira's oath in the first place is still so intriguing. The fact that the chapter ended with the "blood met blood" line makes me think we're finally going to get into that whole soulmate thing, which really only makes me want to join in the cackling.

So I will.

Oh, I enjoyed it VERY much. ;) sure, some terrible stuff happened there in the end, not to mention that suddenly Avery's in danger for some unknown thing, but the chapter was great. Some nasty stuff needs to be part of the plot to make it exciting, sadly enough.

You write really well. Every time I see an alert for this story I just go "Yay!" in my head. :) Can't wait to read more.

As you said "Moving plotlines are fantastic." It IS!

Fantastic for all of us. It's truly getting MORE interesting every chapter.

So, I was really happy (and a little bit surprised) that you updated so soon, and I hope you will continue with that, considering that I am currently sick with curiosity! Why does Sira want to protect Avery? Did something happen when Teagans blood met Kais? Was that why she fainted?

As you can see, I'm a horrible curious now! :P

I have nother question, (and I think you actually will be able to answer this one) how old is Teagan, Avery, Kai and the rest? I'm sure you have mentioned that in a previous chapter but I'm to lazy to go back and look for it. Maybe you said which grade they were in, but we don't have the same schoolsystem I, so I can't figure it out And when I think about it, where does this take place? In USA?

Okay, this is alot longer than I thought, so I will sum up;

Great chapter! :P Don't you dare think something else, and the one before this one was (of course) the same, though this one was a little bit more intresting I think ; )

I hope your head isn't spinning by all of my question, and if you can't answer them now, maybe in the next chapter? :P

Have a continuous good february day (it's 17:15 here right now) and I hope you will update soon! )

PS. If I have a 'follow up' question to your answer, or how is it done? Or maybe just wait for the next chapter and ask when i review that one... DS.

AH, please update soon! you left at such a dramatic moment. it was fantastic.

I just want to say again...Teagan rocks. OK, so I'm procrastinating and I have to go back and figure out if Teagan is a half breed ...or if her father was a shape shifter and her mother is a witch...and THAT is what they are trying to cover up. Or you could just answer it in your next author's note...lol, nah I will go look it up. Lurvely-ness! Thanks for the update!

"Soul for Sale" Hm, there has to be a significance to the chapter's title. Well, I personally thought that the story was interesting from chapter 1, but I'm welcome to the idea of being teased with a bit more information.

If the Student Union has been spell-ed against deadly violence, does that include thoughts or just actions? It feels to me that Kai would be angry enough to want to kill her, but settled for a little scare due to all the rules/spells in place.

"blood met blood" Weird chemical reaction occurred?

Man, there needs to be a discussion board somewhere for this story. Cause there are so many clues, but many more unknowns! It's awesome!

Thanks for writing!

p.s. Most of those questions are rhetorical as I'm sure they'll be answered with due time. The question about the student union is the one true question in all of this.

Another cliffhanger! Did she change? Is Kai going to fall for her? The last move is pretty impressive by the way. We have to find out about Sira right?

oh yes, they will now be aware that they are soulmates, christ, he will hate her. but oh i want them to kiss so so much, but i'll guess that will take a while, people can't fint out that they are soulmates, right? it would be dangerous... and why is avery in danger? im looking forward to kais reaction to the soulmate bond, also, if shes a hybrid, shes stronger then him, right? and shes one in a million. one mre thing, how come that not all half-breeds becomes hybrids?