Reviews for Illusoire
A. L. Young chapter 6 . 2/11/2009
:D You do know I love you dearly, right?

Great chapter, wonderfully written, introduces potential romantic parts of the story quite nicely, but I must say, I'm not too fond of Cian. Nuh-uh.
sherbetsi chapter 6 . 2/11/2009
Skipping out.. im sure thats acceptable as long as you get back to this as soon as is humanly possible..

in other words, i read this so slowly because i didnt want it to end.. its one of those stories you want to read loads of chapters in one go cause it like eats at you otherwise with the questions of whats going to happen next and what not..

i wish you wouldnt but if theyre gonna be good and its eating at you then sure get the other stuff out of your system and then get back to this pronto!

sian x
Kjersti chapter 6 . 2/11/2009
Yay! You updated! :) Hm. I'll limit myself to water torture as long as you promise to continue this not too far in the future. :P

But seriously - if you want to write another story in between, that's your choice, your life, your writing. I'll probably love that as well. ;)

Anyway - great chapter. I didn't think it was too filler, we got to see SOME interesting developments, at least. I can't wait to read more. Love this story. :)
Evenstar1389 chapter 6 . 2/11/2009
No plz i want more of this story (

A heart-pumping stress reliever for uni exams (oxymoron i know)... and thanks for the story!

P.S i still want that soulmates action ahaha
Georgiana chapter 6 . 2/11/2009
Yes, I will mind if you "skip out" on this story. Very much! But if it is what it takes for you to get the other spiteful story out of your system, I will tolerate it. (will we get to read the other one?) But please don't make it a long skip. Illusoire is number one on my update list. I've been waiting for this one!

Loved the interaction with Kai and Cian, and I really hope we will find out who her father is one day.
CATpuccino chapter 6 . 2/11/2009
I love it when you updated. Btw, I like Kai. ;)
Lady Silverhawk chapter 6 . 2/11/2009
Awesome chapter. :)
thecakethief chapter 3 . 2/10/2009



love the story!
Venus Smurf1 chapter 6 . 2/10/2009
I bow to you. Really. You're utterly amazing, and this chapter was well worth any wait! I love the characters. I love the plot. I love your writing style, and I love the chemistry. Truly, I would worship you if I weren't afraid of lightening. More please?
MonkeyEyes chapter 6 . 2/10/2009
Oh durn. OK. So SOMEWHERE I got EXTREMELY lost. I thought that Teagan was powerless, chia, guess not! Right well I'm extremely excited about this update. It was great! Thanks!
LivingHell chapter 6 . 2/10/2009
This is still one of the only pieces of fiction I read word for word, very carefully. I enjoy Illusoire immensely and I'm so glad you updated so quickly, well quicker than I expected!

She doesn't know her father? Will it stay like that? My prediction is no, and I bet her father is more influential than Teagan even expects or cares.

The word warbling makes me think of a dolphin, but you named her pompano so i'm guessing she's that type of fish?

And why is Teagan paired with Kai again? and why is she in all his classes? Is this fate or really really bad luck or some actually conspiring against her?


He bared his teeth at her. “I don’t have to be nice about it.”

“No, you don’t.”

He acknowledged that with a slow, amused nod. “And I won’t.”


I found that part probably just as amusing as Kai did.

I wonder if Kai suspects anything odd about Teagan or if he'll be one of those characters who'll deny the truth until he has hard evidence.

the following line: His answering smile stretched feral and humorless. “Maybe we should.”

is unclear because it could either mean he is trying to say we should be afraid of your or we should exterminate you

Them being together in all their classes does seem suspicious, but his not being able to stop thinking about her seems to be related to the soulmate thing, which you haven't introduced yet. Will you be introducing that soon?

And why does Colin think there's something off about Teagan...

"don't make it worth my while": don't make what worth his while?

Will we find out what about Sira makes her trustable?

Why is she in trouble? I like teagan, he's safe and sweet. I def. didn't think that this was a filler chapter... uber enjoyable. It always is.

Great job! Thank you!
Le Meg chapter 6 . 2/10/2009
I like Kai. I know I'm not supposed to. Actually, I think I am supposed to. It's like this weird, unwritten rule in fiction (or maybe just FP) where there's this badass, edgy guy who is all kinds of dangerous and is strictly Not Good for the female protagonist, but damn isn't he all testy and hot? I mean, I'm not the hybrid here, right? So I'll just keep drooling.


Anyway. That was an interesting move, actually, with Kai - I didn't expect him to come right out and say all that so directly. He's a slippery little bitch. Between him, Sira, (well, all of the Others, basically), the hybrid business, and this slow smoldering thing with Cian, Teagan's got her hands full. More than full. Something's gonna drop... ;]
kayoko123 chapter 6 . 2/10/2009
Oh! New story. I've really come to appreciate how your stories are short, simple and sweet! You must hand in amazing writing assignments (when you were still in school).

I love the background and story that you've woven so far in this story. The complexity of around this alternate universe is very different from the other stories I've read authored by you. If I beg nice enough, can I ask for romance in this story too! Maybe as a side-dish? *laughs*

I'm horribly curious about that potion she had earlier in the story (I guess it suppressed her powers/scent). Is there any meaning behind the name "Teagan"? It's rather unique.

I would really like to see more of this story, but if the muse is calling you, then there's no fighting it! As long as you don't give up on this story cause I think you have something wonderful going on here!

Thank you very much for taking the time to write such wonderful stories!

MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 6 . 2/10/2009
such a wonderful author, amazing writing, new and intriguing worlds...if only she ever finished a story...updated regularly...
ghepardo chapter 5 . 2/9/2009
Great story!
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