The reveal was done very nicely :) I am very interested to learn more about Teagan's past, and also how Sira knows about it. Can't wait for an update!

what can i say but amazing. this has got to be one of the best stories on this site. im really impressed and cant wait until the next chapter is out. hopefully it wont be too long.

sian x

Yay! You've updated! I was worried you'd stop writing on this one; it's very interesting.

Nothing really to comment on, though I really like your style. Keep updating!

I've been checking to see if you've updated, but alas... The wait continues.

I wonder... If Teagan is in fact a hybrid, and not a magically-charged half-breed, then what happened to her father? She lived with her father's family; obviously he wasn't in the picture, and he couldn't have been well-known as a shapeshifter, otherwise certainly someone would have figured it out. Hmm...

E, I love your writing so much. ugh, I'm so jealous haha

Lovely story! I really, really like Teagan o_O she's pretty cool in my opinion

Very intriguing story, I'm loving it so far!

Oh my god, this is one of the best stories I think that I have ever read on Fictionpress. It actually gave me goosebumps at one point with your amazingly deep characters and perfect timing. I absolutely love this! Please, keep writing!

Wow was I surprised-and very pleased!- when I saw this speedy update. Thank-you for making the distinction between hybrids and half-breeds...it clears things up a bit and was well written. Can't wait for the next installment!

I was curious before of this chapter.

Now I'm even more curious~ honestly, I can't wait for this story to continue.

Oh, I really like it. It has a certain deth to it, that makes it original and gets me quite curious to read more ;)

But, I'm just wondering; in the summary, it says that Teagan dousen't belive in soulmates. When I think of soulmates, I think of romance, but in the categories you but the story in, it hasn't ramnce in it at all. So, Just wondering, will there be none, or it will, but just be underlying?

Do I even make sense now?

So, I just will say that I love the story, and hope you will udpate soon! )

Cherrs,

An update yay! Wew, does Sira really know? What Teagan is I mean. I swear this story's just getting better and better.

I applaud you for succeeding in writing a story on fictionpress that isn't in the slightest mundane. Yes, some plot situations are familiar, but you've put enough of a spin on it for me, a long time reader on fictionpress, not to notice. I really like this story so far.

Something I particularly like? How slow and easy you're taking this. Chapter five, and it's still the first day. And even if the pace is slow, your content more than makes up for it. I haven't once felt inclined to skim through your chapters, which I find myself doing often with stories on fictionpress.

My favorite character so far is Sira. She is absolutely enthralling and I constantly find myself wanting to know more about her. I love her.

I'm not so sure about Kai or Colin as of now. Kai, I'm hoping, won't turn out so predictable. I'm really crossing my fingers on this one because I feel like I have his character all written out; the typical gorgeous-of-all male lead with his troublesome sob stories.

But I'll give you a bit more credit than that, since the story has been a surprise in itself so far and you seem like a superb author. I really hope you continue to surprise us :)

I don't know how fast you update, but I hope it's soon! This is the first story in a long time that I'll be anticipating updates.

Kudos on the fantastic job so far and good luck! :)

This is awesome! I love witch& shapeshifter stories the most, and this one comes with romance too! I'm really glad to see the regularly updated dates, coz it means i can read more soon D I wonder how Teagan and Kai finds out they are soulmates? The mystery kept me in a loT of suspense at the beginning, i suspected at ch3, and now it's confirmed lol. Though if powerful hybrids legends arent true, how come Teagan can work all kinds of magic? Will we find out the extent of her powers?

Awesome. Thanks so much for posting. I’m hoping Teagan and Cian do share that kiss.

that came faster than i expected. Brilliant stuff though.

just how powerful is Teagan? Is she able to destroy things with a single thought?

no. dont tell me, keep it a surprise.

brilliant stuff. And congrats on breaking a hundred reviews in so few chapters. You're building quite a fanbase :)