Reviews for Illusoire
chic rebel chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
this is really interesting. the whole thing with humans, shapeshifters, and witches. and i like how you put in all the tension between the groups. i can't wait to read more. hope you update soon!
lexicon37893q09 chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
This story is amazing. It is written beautifully and it is so captivating; my heart is beating fast right now because I was so nervous for the characters! Please update soon-I'd love to know what happens next! :)
A Reader Peep chapter 2 . 4/24/2008
Pft, this is great. It does not suck at all! I am insanely curious right now-about everything in general, but especially about Nasira and Teagan.

Is Teagan a cross between a witch and a shapeshifter or something? That might sound ridiculous, but how is it that she can smell so well? I'm pretty sure witches can't do that. Hmm.

Oh, and this is so random, but I was rereading the first chapter to remember everything and in the following sentence, I noticed that you had articles in front of cobra and rattler, but not before anaconda. So a little random thing there that may or may not be an error.

It hadn’t been a cobra or a rattler she’d smelled earlier. It had been anaconda.
Jessica chapter 2 . 4/24/2008
I think it is very obvious that you are trying to do your best by this story. I love it so far and am eager to read more. The whole concept and your way with details is what makes the story in my opinion.
starsfinallyxplode chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
So does Avery know who/what Teagan is or doesn't she?

Anyway, good start so far. The dynamic between the humans, the shapeshifters, the witches and the halfbreeds is fascinating.
QueenofRoses chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
So, I'm a new reader here. Just thought I'd drop a line to say I'm really enjoying this so far. The story has intrigued me, for sure. I really like the dynamics between the races, and the ways the characters are starting to develop. I'm hoping we'll get to see more development and back-story from your main character, which I can only assume we will. So, basically, it's shaping up to be a really epic story.
fergie chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
I love this. I really really do. It's one of the best supernatural stories I've read in a long time and I am absolutely hooked even though there's only two chapters. Where did you get the inspiration for this? and if you don't post again soon...I will cry. Guaranteed. I'll break down sobbing.

Inkbl0t chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
I think it's good, (but what do I know? I do my own beta-reading because I'm too damned shy, sensitive, and cautious to hand it over to someone else :P) so there's no actual need to sound pessimistic, since now the actual plot is starting to develop. Yays~!
Klianie Janiko chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
Oh mystery starting to occur... But why do I feel that the main male character hasn't made his introductory bow? What I don't understand, and if you'll excuse me, it's 1am right now in Australia, is that if Teagan is a half-breed, and her mother has put a spell on her, how come Colin gave that sort of reaction? What about the author of the green letter? I have a feeling that's Colin.
ironazalea chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
I love it. I really do. But, [this is me nit-picking] is it "titled up" or "tilted up"? I can feel the chemistry starting between Teagan and Colin and it makes me squirm and squeal like ... a pig?

Rofl. I can come up with nothing better at 6 in the morn.

Thanks for updating~
aurora borealis chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
It didn't suck. I loved it. :) But was Teagan's dad human or shapeshifter? Because I started to wonder now with the whole aura-detecting and smelling stuff... Hmm... (Sucks that she can't use her powers.)

That witch teacher was scary. *shudders*

I can't wait to read more! :)
luv me like no other chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
I can't wait to see what's in the package from her aunt!
Secret Heart01 chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
1. I love that this fic features longer chapters !

2. The fist page held the same - typo!

3. So she can tell auras too, like shapeshifters?

4. His eyes had elongated so that they titled up in his face just slightly. - interesting phrase .. what does "titled up slightly" mean? .. I can't picture that too well ...

5. Is her secret simply that she can do magic and see auras, etc etc?

6. Loving it! Write more please!
norma chapter 2 . 4/22/2008
first: thanks for the update.:-)

i'm finding this second chapter a bit difficult to follow. i guess you probably want it like that and we'll eventually konw all the history, but right now it just seems jumbled. her interaction with colin seemed pretty random to me. and the note about knowing all her secrets kinda typical.

for this part:

She kept her anger in check, but it took effort. “Just a half-breed,” she agreed.

Colin danced closer. “Half-breeds can’t do magic. Can’t shapeshift.”

i read that as half breeds can't do these things but i sense you can so therefore you're lying to me. but i guess i read it wrong...

anyways i hope you wont be upset by my thoughts. i'm just glad to see an update :-D
Artsy chapter 2 . 4/22/2008
Hey, Just wanted to pop in and say that I think you're doing a wonderful job. I'm very much intrigued and can't wait to find out what's going on with T. One thing I do want to mention quick is after the class you say that the two have 30 minutes to class and then half a page down say that they have three hours. I feel a little bad just mentioning the time thing, but i didn't want to forget to mention it. Hopefully I'll be able to make it on in again soon and leave you a real review (semester ends in 3 weeks and I'm on the verge of exhaustion). Good Luck!

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