|Reviews for Illusoire|
| mika chapter 11 . 5/26/2009
Well I'm very sad to hear that you won't be posting this story online anymore, but at the same time I understand the reasoning behind it and respect your decision.
But seriously I loved reading this story! It had a fresh supernatural story line, intriguing characters, lovely descriptive writing - the works! Also, from the way you put together your story I can tell that you're passionate about writing and have immense pride in your work.
I wish you the very best of luck with completing this story and getting it published. Don't ever feel discouraged - perseverance pays after all! I look forward to reading one of your published works one day :)
| Klianie Janiko chapter 11 . 5/26/2009
Please have mercy on us loyal (and lawfully right) readers! I was waiting patiently for the next chapter of this chapter. As unfortunate and disappointing some events maybe, I don't think you should let your talents go to waste. Please update in anyway you feel safe and comfortable and I'll try to seek you out, though I would appreciate some clues :)
| Reiney chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
Man, I'm really sorry that happened. It really pisses me off when people try to take someone else's work and pass it off as their own because they have absolutely no imagination to create something themselves (or they're just too freaking lazy). I'm so sorry. \
I'm sorry the story's going to be going down too. It's so original, and it's amazing to read! It kept me wanting more after each and every chapter. It's different than all the other stories I've read, and I love it!
I would yell at you for taking it down because I love it so much, but I can understand your situation, so I can't yell atcha. I hope you get your story published so that I can read the whole thing!
Please find a way to tell me (er... us, your faithful and loyal reviewers) if (WHEN) you get it published. )
This is definitely a story worth waiting for.
I hope to see it on the shelves! You're a fantastic writer, and if you can't get this published, the publishers in this world deserve to be shot. Well... maybe not shot... They deserve to have some other terrible form of punishment that wouldn't cause them TOO much pain...
Anyway, I'm rambling now about things of no particular importance, so I'm just going to finish this up. Your story is amazing, and I'm very sorry to see it go unfinished on here. I know I was looking forward to reading more of it. Try to update us on publishing and what not!
I look forward to reading the whole thing someday!
A recent loyal and avid fan:
| Deleted37 chapter 4 . 5/25/2009
Jeez, I'm really sorry to hear that you're taking this story down. I never even got to review the last chapter (I've been dreadfully lazy-but just so you know, I enjoyed it tremendously). I won't say I'm not WAY disappointed-because I am-but I understand where you're coming from. Having something you've put so much work into plagiarized by one of the jerkasses that are, unfortunately, extremely common on the net, must feel like a literal kick to the gut. I would probably do the same thing.
Just so you know, the first four chapters or so are still up-was that on a purpose, or is it some kind of glitch? Anyway, here's a heads up if you weren't aware.
Much luck with getting published, life, and everything!
| Love chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
Maybe, at this stage in your writing you should worry less about being plagiarized and more about improvement.
But then again, it's your choice.
I'm personally extremely surprised to find that someone plagiarized Illusoire -although reading Illuisoire itself gave me a constant sense of deja vu in terms of writing style and plot gimmicks.
Good luck in getting it published, haha.
| Christine Paul toolazytogoon chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
what has life come to? ugh. stupid plagiarers (is that a word?) and their stupid plagiarism. sigh. oh well, its ur writing! take it where you want to. i can only hope ill be able to read it sometime in the future.
| Kat Loving chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
I'm sorry to hear that you're removing this story. This is one that I love to read, and that I've anxiously be awaiting for the next chanpter. I am sorry for the plagarisim, and that that is forcing you to withdraw from this site for sheer self-preservation. I commend you for making the decision, and I'm keeping my eyes open for your name on the bookstore shelves!
| Charlee Rayne chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
NO! WHY IS ALL MY FAVORITE STORIES DOING THIS TO ME! YOUR ALL DOING IT ON PURPOSE! I CAN FEEL IT! (just joking...)
| Ever.Real chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
Woah... I can't believe someone tried to pass your story off as your own. That's so horrible- I hope their punishment is worse than just having that story taken down? I've been reading fp stories for awhile... but I've never actually had an account. Not quite sure how everything works..
I have to say, for what I managed to read of your story before you took it down, it was amazing. I like your original plot line, and how you didn't just use simple names like Max and Emily, but unique and original names. They helped add to the supernatural aspect of your story and make it easier to see that this world wasn't like our own.
I wish you'd continue posting your stories, but I see why you won't. I hope you continue writing though!
| kami chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
well can you atleast leave a summary of what's gonna happen the way Myrika did coz its really hard not knowing...you dont have to write a new chappie, but it really suck that you are taking the whole thing down without tying lose ends...please, i really love this story and I atleast wanna know what happens until the end. thanks
| E X H I B I T I O N I S T chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
Are you fucking kidding me?
I loved this story!
Screw the people that plagarize your story.
Screw you for not continuing this amazing story cuse really - This story has so much potential and you've already reached most of it.
It's just too good and BAH!
Yes, I'm mad that you've discontinued posting on FP cause it's just such a disappointment!
Sorry for ranting and I sincerely hope that you reconsider your choice.
| Freddy Teddy chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
:( I liked your story! And whoever Qwerty is stinks! Don't listen to them! You see all your reviews! IT's more than any other story! You do what you have to do!
| graviola chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
Hello, I need to be honest and say I'm heartbroken about this...but I understand your reasons. It's a wonderfull story, and I hope that you are abble to publish it. Well, if you can't get a publishing contract why not use one these sites and publish it yourself? I have the address of one these sites if you want, the posting fees are not exactly low...but if you publish there I'll buy it. I'm sure many people will.
It's what they say, if we want something we make it happen...or something like that.
There are also sites who keep stories for editors to see or something, I can't say if works..but I'm guessing it can't hurt(you can register this as yours right?).
Good luck and I sugest you use this page to update us in your plans for your book. Don't delete the story, I'm keeping it in my favorites so if you publish something let us now.
I'm in Brazil so the posting cost will be a bitch, but I'll buy it!
| CATpuccino chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
I'm so sad that you took down your story but yeah I can understand that. I hope it won't happen to you too. All the best for you then. Let me know if your works get published!
| Mell8 chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
I completely understand your reasons for removing your story. Plagiarizing is not okay. But, I really want to read more! I really, really loved your story and want to know more. Is there some way I can get your new chapters too? Thanks and happy writing,