Reviews for Illusoire |
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PegasusWings chapter 10 . 5/19/2009 am loving the story you have going so far! Can't wait to see where you take this :D |
Mac Vicchrilli chapter 10 . 5/19/2009 I'm hooked! This is an incredible story and I do hope to hear you've updated soon. I love the characters and their personalities; the mystery of Sira, her mother, Kai- especially with how this last chapter ended. I look forward to reading much more! P.S. I'm also so very glad you convinced Myrika to rewrite her story. ;) |
Redded chapter 10 . 5/18/2009 My immediate reaction was, "Why the hell would he kiss her?" Ahaha, this story's just full of surprises. Waiting to see where you're going with this. |
Kielke chapter 10 . 5/17/2009 i love the story so farr. i cant wait for more ] |
Genato chapter 10 . 5/16/2009 very very nice. my gad, i can feel the tension, even from here! so intense! please update. |
Reiney chapter 10 . 5/16/2009 GRAGH! What happens next, WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? What a cruel way to end a chapter. Cruelty! Pure cruelty! Your story is amazingly awesome, and very original, and I love it, and I must know what happens next! PLEASE update soon! I must know! ~Reiney |
JRose chapter 10 . 5/12/2009 This is a highly engaging story and an original idea in my opinion. But it seems to be missing something to it- I can't quite put my finger on what that is though. Maybe a bit more explanation/depth on the Kai front would enhance the story, maybe a chapter from his pov? Also something thats been bugging me is what does Teagan shape-shift into if she can at all? Anyways I'm sure the lack of update-age has stemmed from exams etc etc so good luck with them and can't wait to see what happens next! |
ess3sandra chapter 10 . 5/11/2009 shit, he kissed her, this is bound to get very hot indeed, if he wont kill her first... |
Poetryfreak173 chapter 10 . 5/10/2009 That one was just evil man, just plain old cruel. And I bet you're gonna go on another, like year long haitus again. SIGH. Please! UPDATE SOON! (I'll love you forever!) (and EVER!) |
Cassie chapter 10 . 5/10/2009 Amazing. Was definitely not expecting that last little bit. Kai seems so intriguing... I never know what to expect with him. UPDATE SOON! |
cherrypiesizzle chapter 10 . 5/8/2009 WHOA! You just ended it just like that...! I'm really intrigued, still, but I wish we would get to know Kai a little better - as of now he's just a vague figure with little depth to him, so he doesn't feel 'real' to me, you know? It will be interesting to see how his and Teagan's relationship evolves into something amazing. Really looking forward to it. |
alineofprose chapter 10 . 5/8/2009 "Ejoying it" may quite possibly be the understatement of the year. It's entralling, and incredibly well written. And their chemistry is explosive - that helps just a little, too. I think it's the combination of those things that makes you drop anything you're doing and compels you to read it. I'm kind of geeky in that I love to know how all their world works and how their history is. Working in Beauty and the Beast was fantastic - your ideas are so original and creative it almost makes me want to go and hide in my cliche little cupboard. What about the Frog Prince? :P I love how Kai's so animalistic - whether it be in relation to her or in general. I'm sure that about ever single book that involved werewolves and soulmates stresses how the wolf has this deep, primitive urge to "claim" her. Don't suppose it's anything similar? Especially when it seems that Shifters often feast on humans (although Tea is quite inhuman). I'm keen to learn more about the knowledge stones - you said that Teagan's mother wove enchantments into it, and that knowledge stones only worked for one person. How do they have information that the owner doesn't recognise if the owner placed the information into it in the first place? Or is it such that although the owner is dead, the knowledge stone containing that information is still stored. (I would've thought that there would've been some funny burial right to observe regarding these.) I don't suppose they play a bigger part in this, do they? :P I'm wondering if that "I can't stop think about you" will end up getting her killed. I don't suppose we'll ever get a description of Colin's father? Does the potion alter her looks at all, or just her magic? The semester isn't over for another month for me. *le sigh* Good luck on your finals, though! Keep writing. :) |
Masi.H chapter 10 . 5/7/2009 This is amazing. Your whole story is, actually. I'm so happy I stumbled upon it :) Oh my God, this chapter left me tingling all over. I can't wait for the next one! How will Teagan react to the kiss? On an afterthought, I kind of hope she'll kiss him back because of you know, a soulmate thing. I'm getting bad thoughts here ;D Can't wait for the next chapter! |
rosieroo chapter 10 . 5/7/2009 oh wow! holy cow! talk about a cliffhanger! far out! you have to update snappy! please! i love it! |
Lily Llynn chapter 10 . 5/6/2009 It took me awhile to get around to this, but I'm glad I finally did! I really liked the class discussion (and the tweaked Beauty and the Beast... that was awesome). Great cliffhanger ending (I totally hate you for it, but it's a good ending), and I definitely can't wait for the next chapter. Ahaha congrats on your victory w/ Myrika. It sounds like you guys do equal bothering, though. XD |