Reviews for her heart's shape is a star
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
i love your 2nd verse.
Thomicas chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Great poem, but you should have called it "My Heart's Shape Is A Star", as this is what you use in the poem. It doesn't really do any good changing the perspective for the title.

Having that said: Very well done and original.

Keep it up!

Thomicas
In the Rye chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
interesting. "my fingers twitch with anxiousness/or maybe unhappiness" i really liked this line