|Reviews for her heart's shape is a star|
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
i love your 2nd verse.
| Thomicas chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Great poem, but you should have called it "My Heart's Shape Is A Star", as this is what you use in the poem. It doesn't really do any good changing the perspective for the title.
Having that said: Very well done and original.
Keep it up!
| In the Rye chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
interesting. "my fingers twitch with anxiousness/or maybe unhappiness" i really liked this line