Nice lovable characters I like it!

Absolutely fantastic story!

Very original! The story had it all adventure and all the emotions that goes along. I never got bored.

Loved the ending, but i am very curious of what lifestyle they choose? Afterall Rebecca wanted the adventures back and of course James would love to continue being a pirate.

Loved all your characters. You developed Rebecca very well in my oppinion (her growth in personality).

Thanks for story I enjoyed it very much ;)

So, i've read this far

and i thought it was great, but now

it just seems like your putting too much in one story /

This story...this story was amazing ane very well written. I now want the fairytail ending that Rebecca received and this story changed my view on the typical fairy-tale. Bravo!

Continue writting,

Alex

I just wanted to say that I had a fun time reading this story. It took me on a wonderful adventure and I thank you for that.

Aww...I loved the ending it's so sweet. I wonder what James is going to do now that he's not a pirate.

You're really good! A very good writer!

i love this story! once i started reading it i just couldnt seem to stop. You are an amazing writer and this story was amazing, definately one of my favorites. and i have read many more than a hundred fan fictions.

Aw!

You should feel proud. You actually managed to make me overly giddy to the point where my breathing was staggered (hrmn... That sentence made little to no sense. Oh well!). That's hard to do.

I lurved it! It was original and well done and awesome and exciting and adventurous and romantic and sad and happy and heart-wrenching, but I digress.

I KNEW THE NECKLACE THINGY WAS NEVER EXPLAINED. I noticed that she had two necklaces, and I was like, oops, someone left something out! But then I kept reading, like the good little audience member I am, and voila! An answer came from the shimmering abyss of your imagination!

One question. Several times in your story, you say ton, when I think it should be the word town. I'm not sure though, because it happened 2 or 3 times and each time it was italicized, and had to do with being the "talk of the ton". That doesn't make sense...

Anyways, loved the story! Sorry if this was random and or rambly- your story made me all giddy!

Oh, you tricked me.

Ya i'm reading the re write, good so far. hmm i wonder what you could be planning for them. you have me excited. :)

Hazuki x x x

I really liked the story and I thought that the plot was interesting, especially with the whole thing with her changing partway through. Nice job. I just have one question: in the end, why did he feel disgusted? Was it because she had just said she didn't want anything but now she was saying she did? Why was it?

An excellent start to a story. I hope this only gets better and better from here. I'll keep popping in to tell you what I think about where it goes.

W00t! That story was awesome! You are one heck of a fantastic writer! I can't begin to say how good that was!

*hug*

That was an incredible story. I read the entire thing in one day, lol, and now it's 4 AM. But that's okay. ;D

All I can say is-

Faved. :)