I'm not too sure how much I like the goddess part. It just doesn't seem to flow with everything else but it does work, perhaps it will be better with the future chapters. But I do love when James comes to the rescue, very dashing. I just wish they'd finally have a good heated kiss. Bravo once more and happy birthday.

-Alice

Okay, Rebecca acted extremely calm for being introduced to goddesses. But it's better that she was, since they could've killed her in an instant I bet. And I see that Rebecca is following their instructions. I'm not sure why... She most likely could've disobeyed them. Though, she'd probably have a hard life if she did. If they'd let her have one at all. Anyway, amazing chapter! Happy Early Birthday!

This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love it! I can't believe how dedicated you are to update your stories once a week, since I'm such a procrastinator. X Keep up the awesome work!

Rebecca didn't run like she was suppose to. Not good, I think. Horrible of you to leave us hanging like that.

wow this is really good, can't wait 4 more.

Hazuki

Now now. What is Artemis going to do with Rebecca? James won't be pleased that his love has been absconded by a goddess. I am so impressed at your updating. I aim for once a month, I know it is awful of me, but I do. Good luck with Nanowrimo. I participate too. It's a crazy month.

Lovely as always! I wish James wouldn't have let Rebecca run off on her own in the town, it just would have been so sweet to have them together, perhaps walking hand in hand. Plot is still great, you still got me hooked and I hope you can update next week but it is understandable if there isn't one. I'm crazy busy with school too.

Stay lovely!

-Alice

-Gasp!- What? I wonder was a goddess would want with Rebecca...? I don't know much about Greek gods and goddesses, but if I had to take a guess, I'd guess it was Athena. But I kinda doubt that the goddess Athena would be looking for Rebecca. Maybe she's evil... Ah, well, I'll have to wait and find out. I'll be waiting patiently for your next update!

*swoon* i love the Rebecca-James romance :)

post again soon please

Trapped on a ship with him. It was bond to happen.

I rather like the way that the relationship between James and Rebecca is playing out.

On another note, perhaps it just me, but I think that a conversation or some sort of last encounter between Lotty and Rebecca would have been interesting to witness.

Uh oh. Should we be worried? I didn't think things would be awkward between them after last chapter. Maybe a little uncomfortable at first, but then that's it. I understand that James is a little intense, but why is Rebecca so scared of him? I don't get it.

Keep writing! Also, I don't know if you do this, I know I did just because I like to not do homework. Do you look online to find pictures of your main characters, see if you can find models who fit your descriptions? I did. Mostly because it is entertaining and time consuming. I have a couple good websites if you want to kill some time...

Keep writing!

PS I liked the author's note at the beginning.

Ha! Elizabeth and Will's lover's quarrel was pretty funny. Especially since Rebecca was trying so hard not to talk to James, and blushing at their topic.

Aw, and their relationship was getting so much better. Ah, well! Looks like James and Rebecca will have one heck of a talk there. I can't wait to see how it turns out!

yay tis good. I can't wait 4 more, looking forward to next Wednesday, or Thursday or when eva.

Hazuki x

After spending the last hour and a half reading this story, I've come to the conclusion that I've got a girl crush on Rebecca. Haha seriously she's awesome! James is cool too and so is Will. Can't wait to read more...your story's awesome!